Failure Is Angular - Comments

this is ridiculously good!so different to any other fanfic on here, please update!

Confession, I had to look up who Josh Franceschi was. But this is amazingly written. No real mistakes that I caught. A little surreal for me, because I went to university with two best friends named Reuben and Josh. Very odd, but kind of funny. I'm reccing and subscribing. This is truly amazing. I love Jane's character. Very well done.

Wow, I'm in love with this! This is the first Josh Franceschi fanfiction I've ever read, and I must say that I'm glad comment swap pushed me in your direction. I absolutely love your vocabulary. It's so much more refreshing from the normal bland stuff. It gives the story a bit more of a twange. I also really like how you make Jane seem like a real character. She's not just a Mary-Sue. She has real emotions and feelings. And how Jane stays with Rueben even through the degredation...I can definitely feel for her.

Wow, this is the first Josh Franceschi fan fiction I have ever read and I really like. You are an absolutely amazing writer and I just couldn't stop reading. The characters are amazing, not at all dull and boring like most stories I read. Please continue writing, you truly have a gift and I can't wait for more!

Seriously girl, the more I read the more I need to know everything! I love this story, and you already know how much I love your writing in general. I cannot wait for more. I just need to know what's happening, it's killing me girl! Hahaha. Love the hints you throw in though, like about the accident. Makes me even more hooked!
Update again soon please!

Wow the letter in this chapter held a lot of emotions.
The main one was a lot of resentment toward Reuben.
Because the way she writes her letters, she wants Reuben to fall so hard and not being able to get again.
She wants him to suffer for what he did to her during their relationship and the accident that has yet to be revealed.
He messed her up so bad that it seems that she can't really remember who she was before the accident.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so happy you updated! I love this story and I absolutely love the plot and how you've written it. (:

I am completely in love with how you write. Half the time it feels more like poetry, and I can't help but fall in love with it! And also I love how you've drawn everyone in with your story because we don't know what the fuck is really going on. Haha. I'm loving everything about Josh in this, from how crude he is in the other chapters to how sweet he is in this one. It's a crazy difference, and I can't wait to see when he starts being like that with her. I also can't wait to know what's actually going on with her! I am completely in love with this story girl! I need more!
Update again soon please!!

What the fuck is going on here?! I honestly girl, that whole chapter was so beautifully written (like everything else you write) That gave us such an in sight of everything. We all knew that shit went bad with Reuben and Jane, because he's a huge dick and the fact that she's basically writing a letter about the downfall of their relationship, their downfall being Josh of course.

But this chapter left me with so many fucking questions man. What the fuck is wrong with her? Is she just experiencing panic attacks and such or does she have an actually illness? I'm leaning towards illness which will give reasons for the letters, a way to cope with shit. But I could be completely wrong.

But Josh, my god. How could someone so crude and completely ridiculous end up the cutest thing in the world. The way he held her and the kiss they shared. Him encouraging her to write more broke my heart even more. That boy will be the death of me.

Could you update again, like NOW. I need to know more about Jane and Josh and how they got to this cuteness point and what the fuck is wrong with her!

I love this and I need updates!!!

Yay glad this was updated

I am so happy you updated. I absolutely love this story. I am very excited for he rest of it!

Wow she had an attack of some kind that her mother and Josh had to help her.
I do wonder why her mother is so stiff like that, she's probably scared that Jane is going to disappear one day and maybe that's her mother's way of reassuring herself and Jane that is she is going to get better soon.
I thought when Josh read the part of the letter where she stated that Reuben was a toxic and Josh was her antidote was very sweet!
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Holy heck that was a great chapter. I swear when she was struggling to breathe I was like holding my breath. Can't wait for the next chapter.

I have to tell you that I just started reading this and I love it! I'll leave you a better comment later, but I just thought I should let you know ;)
Seriously though, Josh in this is so different from everything else, and I think it's amazing!
But better comment coming soon, when I'm not dying.

*insert motivational comment because I really wanna read the next chapter* <3 <3

I'M IN LOVE WITH JOSH AND THIS IS PERFECT OH MY GOD OKAY

I think I said it before but I'm gonna say it again. Your Josh stories are by far the best!

i love this chapter, please update again soon :D

What the fuck?! I know you told me that you were going to update, so I was waiting for the email telling me that you did but I didn't get it. Thank god I'm a lurk and went to read this bitch hahaha.

Josh is so fucking SEXY! I love how you wrote him in this. He's not the usual little pussy that a lot of people write him as, but he's so confident and raw. If I was Jane, I'd bang the fuck out of him hahaha. When he reached for his zipper after her little outburst, I was like GOD DAMN. Fucking Josh hahaha. I really love this girl and I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next update. I have so many questions about this story.

I love your writing so fucking much. Update soon (;

I am so happy you updated! And I liked this chapter a lot! Please update soon :)