Failure Is Angular - Comments

I keep imaging Josh from the last chapter every time I read this story! X3
It was hot when Josh got off when she was just calling him names and just how she out him down.
And it seems that he has his eyes on her and just keeps teasing her by getting in her personal space and saying things to her.
I can just picture Reuben tossing things in the cart and then she is putting the things that they don't need back on the shelf!
So by her letter, she started to go to Josh for comfort and affection that her boyfriend failed to give her as he should.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awwww sweetie its not that bad. Not one of your best but still not terrible. Its good to see how things are progressing between the two. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I am a new reader and I have to say I love it. I found out about this story through BUSTANUT. I can't wait for the next update.

I love Josh during the last chapter, my God.
I was grinning the whole time jdbdksbdosjd
I'm so excited for this story, please update more!

Wow that really took me by surprise!
So Josh got so turned on when she just exploded that he masturbated in front of her????? 0.0
Wow Josh at that time was really just blunt wasn't he?
He didn't care that Reuben was in the other room and could wake up any minute.
That took me by surprise but it was kind of hot!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm so jealous with your writing skills. You are fucking amazing. I always get so intrigued by every word you write. There are so many clever quotes that I love so much. This is all so very smart and just interesting.

Now let's get to the story!
Reuben is a complete idiot but we all have that boyfriend. I thought it was interesting that the reason why she hasn't left the douche was because she didn't want to admit that she made a mistake to her parents. I think i already told you this, but I loved that part so much. It gives a valid reason as to why she stayed.

And now let's get to Josh masturbating. In her eyes, Josh is the most vile person on the earth more so than her boyfriend. But that whole scene with him on the couch was just wow. I found it very odd and just out there, you know? All great stories that i have learned, have those weird moments that just make you scratch your head and think to yourself WHAT THE FUCK JUST HAPPENED. And i thought the whole conversation between the two was adorable. He's just so strange that you can't help but to want the kid hahaha.

And you ended it sooooo fucking perfect. Just a big fuck you to Reuben, that something as his friend jerking it turned her on more than anything he ever did. Without him even touching her. I loved that.

I love this story.
and I want another update! Call me selfish hahahaha

Is it bad that I'm completely in love with Josh after that last chapter? I know I shouldn't be but the way you wrote that scene was amazing. You portrayed Reuben and Josh really well. Also, Reuben's a complete and utter twat. <3

please update, sounds like it's gonna be good :)

oooh i'm intrigued by this so far :) can't wait for more!

Oh yeah! Thank you for that little shout out, you're such a sweetheart girl! (:

Fuck, I feel so bad for this girl. Reuben is a complete monster, from what Jane described him as. Most guys turn out nice and first and then everything goes down hill from there.
I'm really curious to know what happened to her arm and when Reuben turned into the monster. And I can't wait to see how Josh ties in with everything.

so many questions and i need answers!

I'm so very glad that you decided to keep the story and i'm happy that I helped you see the light (; hahahah. You're an amazing writer and i'm glad that I see more comments up above. I can't wait to see what happens next.

So she lost her arm because of Reuben.
This story is getting more interesting, especially how she first met Reuben at a party.
I really think that Reuben was a wolf in sheep clothing, he changed from the sweet and kind guy when she first me to an abusive guy that puts her down.
I wonder if that was Josh that was by the door.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm in love with this story already!
You're an amazing writer and you have a great way with words,
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Update soon! (:

I already love this story!
Reuben is one asshole, getting lost in drugs and dragging her along.
The way he puts her down by calling her fat and just being so mean to her.
So Josh was his dealer and that's when she met.
I am really excited for the story!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dude, I bloody love this!
It's so different from anything i've read on Josh before which is really exciting. I cannot wait to read more of this!! :)
<3

So I have to say that I fucking love this story. So well written and I'm really dying to see what happens next. I'm addicted girl.

Update soon!

I really like what you've written so far, I'm hooked!
But I don't know what to think about Fransexy being a dealer...

Oh god.
I like the first sentence -- which just so happens to be "the first sentence."
I like how it's written and I'm most def subscribing. :')

Sounds like its goona be a good story :)

Wow, her boyfriend is a cunt.

(Oh man, my comments are quality.)