Wow, you only have two chapters and I'm blown away. And hooked (; The first chapter was a great introduction, made me think of who the hell this ex boyfriend was (I would've been devastated if he were Fransexy, ngl), gave me an idea of who your main character was. Then the second chapter totally got me. I've never had a boyfriend that was such a.. dick. Yet when I read this I suddenly felt like it all was real, and I've been through what she has. Ah I sound like such a kiss ass. But it is all true for me so yeah :x This just really makes me want to subscribe and giddily wait for more. heh (: So I love it. Can't wait for more, you're a lovely writer.
The first chapter was a great introduction, made me think of who the hell this ex boyfriend was (I would've been devastated if he were Fransexy, ngl), gave me an idea of who your main character was.
Then the second chapter totally got me. I've never had a boyfriend that was such a.. dick. Yet when I read this I suddenly felt like it all was real, and I've been through what she has.
Ah I sound like such a kiss ass. But it is all true for me so yeah :x
This just really makes me want to subscribe and giddily wait for more. heh (:
So I love it. Can't wait for more, you're a lovely writer.