Exit, Pursued by a Bear - Comments

The title is unique, I find it a tad odd that she fell in love at first sight, simply because she doesn't seem like the type.
Love at first sight is usually stored for people who fall super, super easily.
It's a little over-done that she had to hold a gasp over how hot he is.
OKAY, OKAY, I WOULD EAT ICE CREAM OFF TAYLOR'S ABS, I don't believe I'd gasp if he walked into the room.

I only read the first chapter, simply because it doesn't really capture my preferences. I really enjoyed how you have criminals as your characters, makes them unique.
It's got a lot of potential. :)

Dude, I'm subbing.

This is so funny! But also cute and romantic and a whole bunch of other things I can't even begin to describe. I love Wayland; he's my favorite. And Corn! xD

Update soon, please. <3

I like it so far.
The background is way too hard on my eyes though.
The summary was really good.
I love your writing style.
It's a good story altogether, good job :)

Awww so cute Jess!!!! Love it :) Lush yew!!! <3

I think that this is really good, kinda confusing at first but gets alot better and is going to be very interesting :]

I love Maggie, by the way, she's so great! ^_^

I like this :D

You write like a lot of modern writers, I don't know if that is a good thing or bad thing. The way you write reminds me of the Percy Jackson seris. Anyways, this was good, I liked it.

Travis in an ass, 'nough said. I hate, hate, hate him. x] Which goes back to the cottage in the woods idea with the cute little woodland creatures. But anyways, since you showed me a preview beforehand, you know my love for Wyatt. I mean, he's such a freakin' cutie. And I wanna steal Sparkplug. WHERE DO YOU COME UP WITH THOSE NAMES?! LORD! They're amazingggg <3
Y'know I love you ;D <3

I don't know. I like it, but then again I don't. There wasn't a lot of detail in here, and I just felt like it went so fast. I liked that there was action, sort of. (:

This is good so far.

I didn't like how short the preface was, and I didn't get much out of it, you just basically told us that she loves/hates this boy, but you could have said that in the chapter. :/

But The rest of it is fine and dandy. ;p

Alright, I just read the first chapter and to be honest, I'm not really interesed in it.
It seemed a little..cliche, almost, to me.
There wasn't a whole lot of description in it, and I just couldn't see myself getting into it.
I'm not saying it's bad, because it's not, but nothing about it really..pulled me in.
That probably sounded really harsh, sorry.
But on a brighter note, I liked the characters and Hell's Kitchen is one of my favorite shows. x]

Ew, creeper vans! I hates them. We always have to park next to them too. I always imagine a creepy dude with no teeth coming out and saying, "Candy, missy? 'Tis good, 'tis verrry good."
I has the creeps now xD
Anyhoo, I have to admit that I'd love to see a few more details between the dialogue. Dunno, that's just me. xD But y'know I love everything you write. Lovely job! <3

hair probably an afro from tossing and turning all night

That amused me. A lot. Like seriously, I found it way funnier than it probably was.

Anyway, I really love this already. I can't wait to see how it turns out and all. This story is just. . .gah. . addicting. I really, really love your writing style. :'D

Update soon, dear.

Oh, and keep up the amazing work. <3

Okay, goofy goober. Y'know I love all your work to pieces. And since you gave me half of chapter 3 to read, I was like: sdfkjsadkjhfsadjhfajgs this girl is awesome <3
Whoa, this is a lame comment. But anyways, I love this line the most: “Do I. Make you. Nervous?”
Tee hee ;D He can make me nervous all he wants. xD
Ilysm <3

Mrs. Hatake, I don't like Travis much either. xD He'll get better, though. I promise. (:

I love this so much! Maggie's my favorite by far. Haha. I don't like Travis much though... not sure why. But the characters are really awesome. And where'd you come up with calling him Corn? I think it's so funny and cute!

So I just read the preface and first chapter.
These characters, first off, are amazing. I thought you would mess up the idea of criminals, but you shocked me. It was great.
It's so funny. I love everything. I'm going to keep reading and subscribe. :D

I actually really like this!

The idea is really interesting and it's so hilarious :D
Travis seems so sweet and, kinda charming. Maggie has a wonderful character. Lastly, I'm definitely subscribing :)

And lastly, "Sparkplug, attack"!!!
:D

The chapters were really awesome, I really like where this is going ;)

Great job!

I guess I'll add a little more in the preface. (: Thanks, guys. <3