Great update! I thought you really captured Jacob's emotions perfectly! It doesn't matter if it's short! If it's a great update, it can be whatever length in my own opinion(: Haha, can't wait to read more, but sad it might come to an end.
Ok, when I read Jacob's p.o.v I couldn't help but think how frikken BRILLIENT you are for coming up with that! That's amazing! Everything that Braylin is feeling phsyically, Jake feels. That's freakin awesome! I mean not for jake or anything bt lyk in general!
I am still in shock so that's all I could get out too say! Cn't wait till nxt update!
Wow! That was an awesome update girlie. I think you did a wonderful job with describing it and such! It felt real, and you stayed true to Jake's characteristics... great job! :)
But I will for sure be sticking around. It's not over yet! :)
That was a wonderful, wonderful, yet quite sad chapter Ashley.
I actually teared up a bit.
They have not at all been horribly horrible!
-Bri <3