I Slept With Someone in 'All Time Low' and All I Got Was a Stupid Fanfiction Written About Me. - Comments

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The layout is nice, even though it's neon on black it's still readable which never usually happens so kudos to you. I used to be really into all these bands you've mentioned when I was in high school, it was a cool flashback to read all those names again. I read the first five chapters. What I read of the story seemed interesting. I am curious about what Audri is so afraid of having revealed, but unfortunately I'm just not all that into fan fiction as I used to be, plus I was more into Alex than Jack back then. Not that there's anything wrong with Jack of cours. If I had come across this about six or seven years ago I would've been all over this. I think you have a good story though, it's just not personally for me anymore.

I don't normally read All Time Low fics (let alone at all) but the title reminded me of when I was in middle school and how much I used to listen to their music. So I liked that you reminded me how far back music can go for me. As for the story it was really good and there were a few mistakes but everyone makes a few mistakes in writing no one is perfect. I really enjoy the characters and hope that you do get a second part going :)

Clara
xxx

Alright lets see here, so I'm guessing 'All Time Low' is a band. As you can see, I don't know them lol

Now with your story

I got to say, I love this title it made me laugh so hard. Every character I read in the story are likeable and love the fact the story is like a "romantic" comedy in a way.

Great job

okay here from comment swap.

There are a couple of grammar mistakes in the beginning, but the characters were very likable and i like that there is romance and humor in this story.
I love your title. it made me super nostalgic.
keep up the good work!

ugh, i didn't get to finish my last comment :p anyways, I don't usually read All Time Low stories, but this one was really good!! I like how you made the characters. :DD I bet the sequel is just as awesome as this one! I can't wait to read it haha <3

hey, great story! :]

Wow, okay, I am EXTREMELY glad I continued on and finished the story. It really started to smooth out and slow a bit. I am addicted. I really wish it wouldn't have ended, but look whose going to go read the sequel now? This bitch! I'm so excited.

Oh, Morgan that hoe, how could she tell? I don't care how drunk she was!
Brooklyn is getting on my nerves, I want Alex to leave her, oops did I say that? Damn.
AND ERIC BETTER LET AUDRI CALL JACK SERIOUSLY.

Ugh, sigh what am I doing with my life. I love you though.

I really like this story! I love how you remixed my favorite band's song title. Though, I feel like it's all moving a bit too fast and it's kind of hard to keep up with. I'm excited to read more!

I am really liking this story. It does seem to be slightly rushed though. It doesn’t flow very well. I suggest using different words. Other than those things the story has amazing potential. I cannot wait to read more and see where this goes. Keep up the good work!

oh my god I apologize I posted the first comment cut off, and the second comment twice and this will be my fourth, useless comment. I'm so sorry about that!!

I just read this, AND the sequal! :-)
first of all, I love all time low and everyone in it. jack barakat, what a sexy guy!
I love the romance AND humor that's in both of your stories! I literally laughed out loud when I read the title of this one.
since the story is finished, and amazing, this will probably end up being one of the few that I end up going back to and rereading :-) awesome work!!! this story is great, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise :-)
((sorry I had to repost, this is the second time tonight that my comments have been cut off!! :-( ))

I just read this, AND the sequal! :-)
first of all, I love all time low and everyone in it. jack barakat, what a sexy guy!
I love the romance AND humor that's in both of your stories! I literally laughed out loud when I read the title of this one.
since the story is finished, and amazing, this will probably end up being one of the few that I end up going back to and rereading :-) awesome work!!! this story is great, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise :-)
((sorry I had to repost, this is the second time tonight that my comments have been cut off!! :-( ))

I just read this, AND the sequal! :-)
first of all, I love all time low and everyone in it. jack barakat, what a sexy guy!
I love the romance AND humor that's in both of your stories! I literally laughed out loud when I read the title of this one.
since the story is finished, and amazing, this will probably end up being one of the few that I end up going back to and rereading :-) awesome work!!!

Well I came into this with a very open mind seeing as I REALLY love All Time Low, they're my favorite band. The first kind of thing that got me was "Ryan", it's Rian but that's an understandable mistake. I liked where it was going though so I kept reading. It's a really good story but it's hard to read or at least for me, I get dizy seeing as its very blocked together and not spaced out. You have an amazing potential though and I hope you continue writing the sequel.

Okay I just finished this whole story today and I'm gonna go crazy if you don't update.. I absolutely love this story and I need to know what happens next. So please update!!

keeeeeeep writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hurry Hurry Hurry with the sequeal pleeeaaaaasssseeeeeeeee!!!
This is amazing!(:

DUUUUUDE that was awesomely awesome!!! i lovvvvvveeeee it your an awesome writer!!! woop woop i cant wait for the dang sequal!!!:)

Morgan should die for telling people about audri. She was such a bitch and so hypocritical!

UPDATE. GO GO GO!