I Slept With Someone in 'All Time Low' and All I Got Was a Stupid Fanfiction Written About Me. - Comments

  • in love we raise.

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    Read chapter one and loved it.
    Milwaukee!
    I live there. I went to bamboozle. I was at the rave.
    -dances-
    OFF TO CHAPTER TWO!
    July 30th, 2010 at 10:24pm
  • Akayytoremember

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    NEXT CHAPTER: YOU'VE GONE PUBLIC?!?!?!
    MORGAN OPENING HER MOUTH AND THE BLONDE CHICK
    OHHHH FUCKKKKK.
    EXCUSE MY LANGUAGE AND CAPS LOCK! haha
    July 30th, 2010 at 10:17pm
  • Akayytoremember

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    Three chapters?!
    Evil Laugh?!?!?!?!
    NOOOOOOOOOOO
    July 30th, 2010 at 02:45am
  • somewhereinbetweenHH

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    first of all, i am super fckn high on sugar right now so if what im about to say doesnt make any sense... im sorry.

    I absolutely luv the title. i laughed so hard its not even funny.

    also, the stories (as in story. is. ) really good so far. Im a huge internet reader. i started about a month ago and i havent read a real book since. I started on quizilla but all the stories are crap, except for a select few, and the top rated list was shit.

    Unfortunately, my dumbass iPod wont let me log into anything on it soooo i cant read anything off Mibba when im not sitting at a desk, which sucks.

    Great, im off topic now and i cant remember wat i was gonna say. damn.

    anyway, good story, keep it up, ill try to find time to keep reading. *smiley face!!!*
    July 30th, 2010 at 02:34am
  • FrEaK_oF_lIFe

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    ho-lee crap i laughed SO hard at the pencil snapping and morgan yelling at audri and not her voicemail XD SO funny.... poor audri..... poor jack..... GAH SADNESS!
    July 29th, 2010 at 05:27am
  • Joancay

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    :( Awww
    July 29th, 2010 at 02:14am
  • Akayytoremember

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    Ok so, Morgan made me crack up this chapter,and awww Audri misses Jack!
    MORE!
    I stare blankly at the screen waiting for more haha
    July 28th, 2010 at 08:39pm
  • FrEaK_oF_lIFe

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    i... CANNOT... fogive you for that >:I LMAO jkjk they didnt fuck... if they had i wouldve killed your ass six ways from sunday lol i was holding my mouth laughing when she was 'flaunting' her tits at alex XD i got the mental image and... aw shit there i go again laughin all over the place and such ahahah nice job... poor jack..

    you bitch. how could you do that hahaha
    July 28th, 2010 at 09:11am
  • Akayytoremember

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    Well it's probably good that the truth came out sooner rather than later although poor Jack is probably crushed :(
    I hope things work themselves out and no one does anything stupid while Audri is away!
    moreeee!<3
    July 28th, 2010 at 03:01am
  • RiverStyx

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    Aww,I think Alex and Audri should get together then Jack and Brooklyn Alex and Audri would be a great couple :D!! PLEASE! i luffle the story.
    July 28th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • Akayytoremember

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    You were right!
    Mr.Gaskarth is causing trouble! hahah
    But uhohhhhh I don't like this kind especially when the next chapter is called "I'm Leaving Tour" "Good!"
    Thanks again for reading He Doesn't Look a Thing like Jesus! and staying up all night for it! and posting it in the authors note!
    <3 lol
    July 27th, 2010 at 04:30pm
  • Akayytoremember

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    I don;t trust that the next chapter is called casual fuck! hahah
    It sounds like a bad type of foreshadowing to me, or I could just be off base lol
    July 27th, 2010 at 04:34am
  • Joancay

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    Very cute! thanks for the two chapters :)
    July 27th, 2010 at 03:35am
  • Akayytoremember

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    Uhohhhh.
    Now Kyle has totally the wrong idea, although I don't know how smart it was for her to run to the guy she used to have a thing with
    July 26th, 2010 at 07:24pm
  • FrEaK_oF_lIFe

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    NEW CHARACTER!? NO WAY! DRAMA!? NO- ok well i helped you with the plot so... nvm that one hahaha I WANT TO MAKE AN APPEARENCE CUZ IM JUST FUCKING COOL!!!! XD just... fyi lmao dude its soooo good btw like the proposal in the rain... damn that was amazing...
    audri alex drama? no. back off hes mine XD lmaojkjk
    MORE PLZ! lol
    July 25th, 2010 at 09:22am
  • Akayytoremember

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    No, the drama never ever ends! lol
    More :D
    July 25th, 2010 at 02:53am
  • FrEaK_oF_lIFe

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    Awww! Jack and Audri sitin in a tree- fornication yessir'ee
    XD more please darling! i need something to think about since were not going to the chicago show
    July 22nd, 2010 at 08:11am
  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    SCREW YOU!!!!! hahahahhhahaha give me more you asshole!!!!! lmao btw the birds look awsome.... not like im looking over your shoulder as you paint r anything....

    :)))
    July 20th, 2010 at 12:42am
  • S.A.Nultemeier

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    I luv this story!
    July 19th, 2010 at 07:45pm
  • FrEaK_oF_lIFe

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    FUCK YOU JACK!!!! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT!!!!!!?!?!?! I MADE YOU PANCAKES!!!! actually no....
    I PLAYED YOU THERAPY SO YOU WOULD MAKE ME PANCAKES!!!!!!! (they were damn delicious btw thanks for that ^_^)

    and... PFFFAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! ^^^^ omg that last comment or ur shitty ass laptop keyboard!?!?! IIIIII BARELY KNOW WHAT I WAS SAYING!!! lmfao!
    July 19th, 2010 at 09:30am