Pearl of the Stars - Comments

First off, gorgeous layout. I love stories with pretty layouts. It makes the read easier on my eyes. xD

You really have a way with words. o.o
The descriptions were seriously amazing, I'm left speechless. Being descriptive, but not too descriptive is a hard task to achieve, but you achieved it well. You should serioulsy continue this. o.o I'm subbing.

Oh, wow.
Well - starting with the title and layout, both are great. I adore the title, because it just sounds so... mystic.
Your writing is amazing. The words, the details.
I think I'll subscribe, because I need to find out what happened to Bartha.

This words were great, and the details were amazing. I have to go check out your other stories if this is how you always write. Its amazing. I'm totally subscribing and will be happily awaiting the next update, which hopefully won't be too long from now! :)

My heart sank at the descriptions.

It was expertly written, and I could literally see it all. Violet is such a pretty name, and I'm sure she's a pretty girl, as well.

I really, really hope you continue this, because you have yourself a subscriber.

I love the title. (:

My first impression on this story was, "What a pretty layout," aha. C:

I like this so far. It has amazing detail and an interesting spark to it.
I do hope you continue it darling<3 C:

Great Job so far. :)

Your use*

You have to continue this. I love it. I love the title, and the whole plot so far sounds great! You use of description is marvelous, dolly. I'm subscribing, so update soon? <3 Great job! :D

Haha, you title automatically drug me into your story ; I'm a HUGE Coheed fan. Besides your awesome title, this story sounds pretty interesting.
:)