Come Down - Comments

Wow she deserves tj she really needs to go for him after all

i love love love love this...can we have another please...but please dont tell me she gets wasted has sex with TJ and then they wont see eachother for another few chapters...i want the romance already...lol

I loved it! Poor Nik she needs someone way better. Someone like Tj! Keep up the awesome work. :)

love, please keep the updates coming

Haha okay so can I just say you had me scared for a second there at the beginning! What a crazy dream! :D

Oh, and this Lucas kid.. Yeah, I don't like him. So, TJ, go get her :D

Update soon <333

Great story so far. Seems like Lucus better watch out cause TJ is going after what he wants!

ahh! told you I would review; finally! anyway OF COURSE this was amaaazing! you totally tricked me with the beginning and I'm like AHHH omg that's so mean. BUT it was wonderfully written & I was SO into it. and this Luke dude? yeah I'm ready to give him some of my 'southern hospitality'. douche. I just hope TJ is there to help make everything better when it's okay. and the Abby character! ahh I love her. I love their relationship/friendship & how she understands everything :) anyyywhooo, HURRY UP & UPDATE! hahaha jk. but I will be anxiously awaiting the emaillll :D

love, i hope nikkita finally realizes she likes TJ

And the plot thickens with what seems to be Kita's jealousy!!
So happy for the update, it was great. . . especially the beginning girl ;)

Ohh is that a little jealousy on Nikkita's part?!
Can't wait for more! <3

I can't wait to see how this little love triangle plays out.
Great update!

Awe! Poor TJ. :( I feel so bad for him!
It's all Lucas' fault. :P
I really loved the update though. More soon, please? ;)

Oh snnnnappp! Haha game on indeed! I'm loving this<3

Awww tj and his nightmare poor guy!

And damn I'm really in love with this chapter

Awesome update! I do have to tell you I thought TJ and Abby were gonna have a quickie in the back. Lol

He breathed out her name as her lips pressed against his jaw, his round, red-tinged cheek, and then finally his mouth in a forceful yet soft kiss. Her grip on him tightened, and he bit back a hiss as her fingernails dug into his soft flesh through his thin tee shirt. Every reasonable thought he had in his mind was forgotten; this was no time for reason. Wrapping his muscular arms around her, TJ picked her body up, grinning into the still unbroken kiss as her legs wrapped around his midsection.

ugh, dead. as i was reading this i felt my cheeks get hot and my mouth went dry; i closed my eyes and i imagined what it would be like to feel the heat of his red-tinted cheeks under my fingers and how his shirt might be soft, but i could still feel his muscles beneath it. and the kiss, when i kissed him i knew it was just going to be a dream. fuck, i wanted it to be real so badly.

“I love you,” she told him, her hands rubbing up and down his back as she continued her intense stare into his eyes.

TJ grinned as he continued he look back at her. “I love you, too,” he told her, whispering, as if they were surrounded by millions of people and his words were only meant for her.

goddamn, i can't even begin to explain how much my heart sped up and slowed down at the same time when i read this. especially with the last line, about how his words were meant only for me, god my heart fucking melted.

“No, it was fucking amazing,” TJ interrupted. “She told me she loved me. She was mine. We were in my apartment, and we were together, like, really together.” TJ grinned as he remembered the scene from his dream, until he remembered what had obviously disturbed him. “After I told her I loved her, she literally disappeared. My whole apartment disappeared. I was just alone, surrounded by nothing.”

WHY ARE YOU SO PERFECT, T.J.? ughghjashfjhasjhfjkashjhgiuoi i want him so bad, alyssa, i swear to god if i don't get some osh-love i will do bad things and cry and pout and just look at that up there! look at how adorable and romantic the fucker is =[ give him to me.

“Maybe you need to forget about her,” he offered before he finally left TJ’s room and shut the door closed behind him.

DON'T YOU FUCKIN' LISTEN TO HIM, T.J.

The thick, plush comforter rested at his waist, keeping his bare chest exposed to the cool air circling around his room because of the central air conditioning.

can i just say how nice this was to picture, seriously? such great imagery in such a simple, well-formulated sentence <3

“Game on, Lucas.”

oh, hell yes. get some, t.j.!!!! don't give up!

btw:

my favorite girl's

i love you so much <3333 =* thank you so much for writing this amazing story for me, for updating it, and for being my friend and making me smile so much. i don't know what i'd do without you, boo. thank you, thank you, thank you.

Okay so once again, I have to apologize for the 43958279575349th time because I have not been keeping up with any of your stories ): But thankfully, I had a little time this weekend to catch up!

For one, I absolutely love what you're doing with this. I really like the overall concept of it. And TJ is ridiculously adorable :) Oh and the dress, yeah, it's beautiful !

Hopefully, the next time you update, my comment is on time :) Update soon <333

I loooove this.

this is one of my favorites! =]
your stories are aaaa-mazing!
i was soooooo happy to see you updated!
can't wait for the next!

Lucas has to be cheating...he needs to get caught!
Aw, TJ is so sweet...love him! <3