Beatlemania! - Comments

I love your story its great!!!!!!! I like your wording choice and the style you write it fits together perfectly

I love your story its great!!!!!!! I like your wording choice and the style you write it fits together perfectly

This is really cool, great idea, I love that you use the grandmother's journal as a connection, I grew up listening to Beatles music! Alice is so loveable and the goldfish thing was hilarious cool idea honestly!

Sounds very interesting:)

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I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS.
Ok first of all I have the hugest crush on John Lennon, and I L O V E The Beatles, so this story is just amazing. The main character's amazing as well. The story line is extremely original as well, and I just totally am in love with this story. Keep writing! c:

Please update! I just love your story so much and askdfjasdf I can't wait for the wedding

Oh please start updating again! This is the first Beatles fanfic I've ever read. It's so well written and just over all a great story!

I've never really been into the Beatles, but I was so interested in this story after seeing the summary that I just had to read more. Alice is such a loveable character, which is usually not found in of stories. This plot was so interesting to me. I was sucked right in!

I was sent here via comment swap.

Firstly, I have NEVER seen a Beatles fanfiction, so you get about 10000000000000000 points before I've even started reading, thank you SO much for writing this, haha! I love the simplicity of the layout, it works really well with the story! There's obviously a lot of chapters, so I'll be reviewing the first few chapters (and reading the rest later).

I loved Alice from the very second I read her. The goldfish thing had me in peals of laughter for at least five minutes. You've just got this way of writing her that makes me want to know more. I love how you add in little snippets about her past, but don;t blurt everything out at the one time. I love your use of description, I love the way you write. Heck, I just love this story! Your sentences flow into each another beautifully, and as I said, I simply love the way you describe things; not too flowery, but not too bland at all! The only thing I don't like is that we know John's name before he actually introduces himself. It makes it seem as if Alice knows him before she knows him, if you get my drift.

You're doing an absolutely fabulous job here, and I will most definitely be subscribing. Keep up the amazing work!

I love how you portray everyone, it's perfect! :D
At first I wasn't into how everyone loved Alice so fast, but the longer the story went on, the more I loved her. Congrats on making a lovable OC.
This story is so great, I read it all in one night, so please update as soon as possible.
With Love,
GoGreenDay
P.S. My favorite Beatle is Paul, followed by Ringo in second. :P

Yay she's not dead! :) Just teasing of course! I love it when you write John and Alice moments. He really sounds like a little child.

YAY! You updated!!
and I comPLETELY understand how life can get the best of free time...
BUT YAY! You updated! And it was quite delightful.
Linda sounds adorable, and Paul should shave his beard. That's it. :P

You finally updated! It's around 1:30 am here. So glad I couldn't sleep or else I would've missed this.
Linda sounds like a handful but cute at the same time.
Paul's beard never did look good on him did it? Or is that just me?

You better update this story soon. I have fallen in love with it. No joke!!! Haha

Lovely update!
I swear there's still something between Alice and John....

Yay! You updated! I just happened to check my email and there was the notification.
No more single Beatles lol. I wonder how the fan girls are going to take to that.
And Paul growing out his beard just to spite Alice! Lol.
John with his phases lol. I have a feeling John and Paul are competing with their music now.

Overall, nice chapter. Sorry my comment was so long. Hope you had fun reading it haha.

I absolutely love your story, that is all I have to say. : )

YAY! THEY'RE FINALLY ENGAGED!
This was absolutely lovely to come back from holiday to. C:

I really liked this one. :)
Paul's a sweetie.
And Susan has no idea what she's talking about. :)
And thanks for the mention, you're a sweetheart!

You have no idea how much this chapter cheered me up. I was having the worst day ever and I got the email about this story being updated and I was stoked.
Aww Susan and Alice's dad are married. :) My mother's name is Susan but that's not important here.
Paul's finally got the courage to ask her. Aww...I just hope nothing happens to ruin it. :)
All in all, I love it and made my day better. Thank you so much!