I love the chapter. :) John is a sweetheart when he said Julia would love Alice more than Yoko, definitely makes me think he's not completely over Alice yet.
Holy pickles, he was going to propose! Oh Alice, why oh why did you get sick?! :( So I see I was kind of wrong about the conflict, It was actually between Alice and her stomach, haha. That was absolutely adorable of John to give her that ring...despite it being in a condom box! Loved this, can't wait for the next update :)
The most innocent party for them in ten years...lol I love that. And he's finally going to propose! It took him a while to even think about it didn't it? Haha I love it! I read it earlier this morning while on the bus and finally got home to actually post a comment. You're really good at capturing their personalities.
xD This story is so great! I'm actually thinking of writing my own Paul story, haha, but it won't be NEAR as awesome as yours. It's beautifully written and captures the British slang very well. I really hope you finish it, I'm on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next. <3
love this chapter! George's message to Ringo gave me a laugh and John is DEFINITELY jealous ;) something tells me there's going to be a little conflict in the next chapter, hehe!
This chapter was better than the last. :) Glad Ringo came back to the band. They couldn't afford to let the the world's greatest drummer go without a fight. And poor Paul when John reminded him of Liam. Have a feeling John's not completely commited to Yoko just yet ;) lol.
I haven't been able to read your updates till now! Sorry. Anyways, I feel kind of bad for Julian not being able to have a dad around. Yoko seems kind of manipulative, but i'm glad john finally comes to realize he's kind of an ... odd father, hehe.
SO, is this the end for possible John/Alice, now that he is engaged and most likely deeply in love with Yoko? :(
But, but, but, but, i still enjoy the Paul/Alice. It's still so hard to choose who to root for.
I really wanna hear Ringo's side of the story, I can't wait! Even in your portrayal of the Beatles, I can tell there's so much tension between them all. Sigh, even going back and reading the beginning of your story, i miss their mop-top days.
I really like this chapter, especially when she tried not saying I told you so. Honestly I love the way John is about Yoko. I wish I had a guy that would feel that way about me. Hahaha :) Can't wait to hear Ringo's story. And is Paul ever going to propose to Alice? Just wondering lol.
quite a cute chapter, I loved it! :) I thought Alice's family would have been more protective, but i guess Paul easily charmed them--but Paul can charm just about anyone, hehe. I can't wait to see what happens when Alice meets Paul's family! :)
I love her family, they're awesome :) Mine would be ridiculously protective/flirty, haha. I can't wait to read about Paul's family, so yeah, I loved it as usual :)
Aww Alice's family is adorable lol. My family wouldn't be so charmed that's for sure. I wonder what Paul's family's reaction would be when they meet Alice. Can't wait to find out! :)
I absolutely love, love, love your story! :) I came across this Friday night and finished Sunday; I told myself I would savor the chapters you had up, but I couldn't help myself! Your writing is lovely and descriptive, along with the story, I simply couldn't get enough! I honestly don't know which Beatle I should be rooting for to end up with Alice, both John and Paul are my favorites! So I've thought up a solution for Alice, THREE WAY MARRIAGE. Kidding, kidding. Anyhow, I really do hope and would love if you update soon!
John is a sweetheart when he said Julia would love Alice more than Yoko, definitely makes me think he's not completely over Alice yet.