A Day at the Park - Comments

love the update...i really hope her and Richie get back together..

This is just so freaking adorable, I almost can't stand it. But it seems to get better with ever update!

Now I feel bad for Richie... Why are you doing this to me ?? :'(

And again... thanks for Carts ! ;)

LOL @ Vero's comment! Wait for at least the next couple of chapters.

Gotta love Richie as always. Ali's just being vulnerable and thought kissing Richie is like a lifeline. She's just scared and acting on her feelings.

You are ruining all Bee efforts of making Carts nice. Thank you ! :)
But Rich is very sweet. It's very annoying but what can I do ?

So adorable.

But.. Danny B is divorced. Sorry. :(

aw I know you want to take your time with them but get them closer :)

i'm actually pretty happy how the "one shot" turned out :D
and though I still hate on Mike a little, he's become my guilty pleasure (verrrrrrrrrrrrry guilty pleasure) and that's all your doing :)

Aha, but seriously, keep up the good work!

STOP MAKING ME CRY!

Stop it! Just stop making me all misty eyed! Now I have to top it up with my Carts fic... in all of its Tastykake glory!

Mike Richards has officialy become my guilty pleasure... I almost can't stand myself for being so addicted to a story about him lol
but it's good!

It's so sad... :'(
and Mike is so nice... I don't like liking him.

I'm glad Ali is starting to heal. Maybe this trip will do her good. Now let's hope Mike doesn't mess up.

I kinda thought Ali would end up with JVR for a moment there. Thank you for not heading in that direction. I love your stories!

me gusta. <3

I just read this story throuhg in one sitting :D
I don't necessarily like the Flyers and I don't necessarily like Mike, I agree with Ali on that one 100% (prolly comes with the territory of being a 'Hawks girl...)
but I like this story and I like the way you write it, so I'll subscribe and read it, even if Mike makes me cringe every now and then ;) and Carts too :P

Very well written but we'll see what happens. If they do get back together, it'll only be a matter of time!

Glad you're liking the Carts fic!

Oooo like very much! Almost started crying at work! haha. Keep it up. And I see Richie coming back into Ali's life now that Lilly is gone... ;)

I just caught up on everything that's happened. I cried like a baby in the last two chapters.

I think Richie needs to back up and give her space.