A Day at the Park - Comments

Holy shit, that was just so sad. And honestly, I don't think Richie and Ali could come back together at all, the way you've written the story, it looks impossible. Part of me wonders if Ali would let Richie in to help with her grief but she's been so adamant about not listening to him or anything that its probably fruitless. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Holy @#$% that is intense, and SO sad! Poor Ali :( I can't imagine losing my younger sister. RIP Lilly. Just devastating. I can't wait to see what happens next.

:'( So sad. A very real aspect to your story; it makes it seem real.

You mean. I don't like you... :'(

That was ... :( omg that poor family and James :[

:'(

I cried

Oh no! :(

Love the new chapter! I hope <3 everything turns out ok.

poor ali... loved the update and i can't wait for more!

awww Richie just needs to tell her he loves her!! He just need to!

:'( JVR to the rescue!

great update...i hope she forgives Richie..but what a jerk..lol

Seriously a drunk Richie+someone Carts set up to seduce him=sad outcome!

That's why I went back to Doughty as my Tumblr avatar over an uber hot Carter!

Awesome updates all your stories are great but I love richie....lol update soon

Carts is such a dick. I bet he set it up, being the hater he is in this fic. Argh, such an asshole.

Yay Richie-Ali happiness! But what kind of drama? Carter slips a date rape drug and sleeps with Ali? :S

You double posted Chapter 8.

Carts is such a douchenozzle in this fic. Wow, he sucks ass.

Wow you really made Carts into a douche beyond douche. Me gustas! :D

Btw you double post Chapter 8!

Her dad needs to chill out. She's not some little girl anymore.

Can't wait for the next update.