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  • FanFicFanatic94

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    rather it be in first person. more fun that way i think
    May 25th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • Cassandra Lee

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    im loving the changes :d keep it up!! hope to see an update soon <3
    May 24th, 2011 at 06:38am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    1)I really like this.
    2)I like it in 3rd.

    Thanks :)
    May 24th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • dawn8279

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    i like it written like this
    May 24th, 2011 at 05:00am
  • VetteLover

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    I really liked the original, but hey, I'm betting this will be just as good. As for the pov, I think it would be better from first person. But whatever is easier for you to write and whatever fits better with the story line is what you should do.
    May 24th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • No Brakes; No Mercy

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    Third person is my preference. I was waiting for Jimmy to run out of the bus screaming, running, and eventually beating the living crap out of Jay. lol. Please update soon!
    May 24th, 2011 at 03:15am
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    ghhgfhfh JAY, YOU ACTUALLY SUCK SO MUCH HOMLESS MALE PENIS RIGHT NOW!
    Is it weird to say I like the rewrite? It's like saying "oh yeah, I like reading about a girl being abused, whoo!" but, I mean it like, the original was great, obviously! but the rewrite is like, a step up, a really big step up. It really feels like you've matured as an author in such a short amount of time.
    Third person is my preference (:
    May 24th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • saint james.

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    I really like the rewrite so far and I prefer first person. Update very soon!
    May 24th, 2011 at 03:06am
  • brokenarrow

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    I went to that concert!!!!! but in moline illinois
    May 20th, 2011 at 04:21am
  • Holmzes

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    Woahh totally got confused when I read this. I was like.. "wasn't there moreee???"
    Update soon! =)
    May 19th, 2011 at 04:47pm
  • Acadia.Is.Gone

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    I'm really pumped about the rewrite, it seems promising, and since we all already know what a great author you are it should be pretty sick (: excited for more !
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:58am
  • taybooboo

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    I really like this storyyy. keep it up
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:40am
  • FanFicFanatic94

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    wait... are you changing everything? well i shouldnt say in case there are new subscribers/commenters. shouldnt spoil anything you might do :/
    guess ill just hafta wait and read more *sigh*
    May 19th, 2011 at 02:37am
  • JayCaffrey

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    I was right in the middle of reading this!!! And then it said that the chapters didn't exist anymore D:
    Damn it was getting good too
    May 19th, 2011 at 01:28am
  • xshanmarie21

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    i lurvvvv you!
    May 18th, 2011 at 11:52pm
  • Adleigh_Lynn212

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    I agree with EmmyB!It made me sad when it said this chapter doesnt exist:( I'd be really happy if you brought it back!!:)
    May 18th, 2011 at 11:33pm
  • Synyster's_Vengeance

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    I've just seen this... read to chapter 6 then poof! everything has disappeared! Please to have it back so I can read more? It was getting to a good part! lol xx
    May 18th, 2011 at 11:28pm
  • CookieWah

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    OMG!!! is it done here? -.- IM LIKE :O omg! hes so... dreaamy & hot!! LOL
    i practically LOVE YOU!! xD haha plz i need more INFOO NOOW! ((:
    October 12th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • Demented Sweetheart

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    I was all 'now I'm realy gonna have to find a swear out, she's probably gonna kill payson or somthing I can totaly see that happening *bites nails* read, it ends without death. Well I woulda changed the last line but YES NOONE DIED! I will read the goddamn sequel because you have me hooked on this story, Damn I wish my Korn Fan Fiction could have people wraped around it's finger.
    October 12th, 2010 at 01:25am
  • storyluver1143

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    grrrr cliffhanger -.-
    thanks for writing this story!
    cant wait for the sequel! =]
    October 10th, 2010 at 09:22am