I really liked the original, but hey, I'm betting this will be just as good. As for the pov, I think it would be better from first person. But whatever is easier for you to write and whatever fits better with the story line is what you should do.
Third person is my preference. I was waiting for Jimmy to run out of the bus screaming, running, and eventually beating the living crap out of Jay. lol. Please update soon!
ghhgfhfh JAY, YOU ACTUALLY SUCK SO MUCH HOMLESS MALE PENIS RIGHT NOW! Is it weird to say I like the rewrite? It's like saying "oh yeah, I like reading about a girl being abused, whoo!" but, I mean it like, the original was great, obviously! but the rewrite is like, a step up, a really big step up. It really feels like you've matured as an author in such a short amount of time. Third person is my preference (:
I'm really pumped about the rewrite, it seems promising, and since we all already know what a great author you are it should be pretty sick (: excited for more !
wait... are you changing everything? well i shouldnt say in case there are new subscribers/commenters. shouldnt spoil anything you might do :/ guess ill just hafta wait and read more *sigh*
I've just seen this... read to chapter 6 then poof! everything has disappeared! Please to have it back so I can read more? It was getting to a good part! lol xx
I was all 'now I'm realy gonna have to find a swear out, she's probably gonna kill payson or somthing I can totaly see that happening *bites nails* read, it ends without death. Well I woulda changed the last line but YES NOONE DIED! I will read the goddamn sequel because you have me hooked on this story, Damn I wish my Korn Fan Fiction could have people wraped around it's finger.