She Was Fading - Comments

  • poison and wine.

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    Christian Rowe. I like it. Now, how's about Delilah?
    November 1st, 2010 at 10:43pm
  • billygibbons

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    update NOW!!!!
    please live delilah :(
    pleaseee.
    November 1st, 2010 at 08:11am
  • poison and wine.

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    No! Update immediately!
    November 1st, 2010 at 03:05am
  • greatbigbagofd1cks

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    I can't handle this. Tears tears tears.
    Update, like, now.
    November 1st, 2010 at 02:07am
  • kahlo

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    I love this.
    Honestly.
    v.v
    It's short and sweet and I'm absolutely in love with it.
    Delilah. is. too. awesome. for. words.
    That is all.
    Please update soon.
    /subscribes.
    November 1st, 2010 at 01:15am
  • breezybrig

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    :(
    November 1st, 2010 at 01:05am
  • awkward;;

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    wow. this is really good. i love it. can't wait for more. :)
    November 1st, 2010 at 12:55am
  • niall horan;

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    this is amazing, i love how short the chapters are. but yet; tell everything.
    I want to know everything about her, she seems like a sweet girl. Tom too, I want them to get married.
    Stupid Stella,
    please update soon
    October 31st, 2010 at 09:56pm
  • Miss Tyranny

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    Deliah's dying! Oh no!
    October 31st, 2010 at 08:38pm
  • SilenceOfStars

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    This... you're a very gifted writer.
    Keep it up, ma'am.
    October 31st, 2010 at 05:26am
  • billygibbons

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    oh my gosh oh my gosh oh my gosh!
    this is utterly amazing :D
    i'm so glad i found it
    update soon please :)
    October 31st, 2010 at 01:47am
  • loverfayce.

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    Gahhh, I love this! That last chapter was so cute. So. Cute. I'm just in love with how this is written… so sweet and simple. (:
    October 30th, 2010 at 09:23pm
  • breezybrig

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    whats wrong with her :(

    more please!
    October 30th, 2010 at 07:39pm
  • Vastum

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    I agree with boston lights, lovely. This story reminds me of the movie 'The Ultimate Gift'. Was that your inspiration?
    October 30th, 2010 at 07:35pm
  • greatbigbagofd1cks

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    He should get her...a thing. Yeah. It's really clever and stuff.
    Update soon, plz.
    October 29th, 2010 at 09:38pm
  • loverfayce.

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    This is just lovely. You say so much with so few words. I love that you don't need to elaborate on anything. This story seems so neat and clean and beautiful.
    October 29th, 2010 at 07:27am
  • greatbigbagofd1cks

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    You're going to kill Delilah, aren't you? AREN'T YOU?!
    If you kill her I'm leaving. Like...fo rlz.

    Nah, I won't leave. That was a lie. The end.

    Update soon, plz.
    October 29th, 2010 at 02:17am
  • Zeldarae

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    At the end of each chapter I was craving for more, (:
    Very interesting.
    October 28th, 2010 at 02:53am
  • PartyTrasha.

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    This is such a good story, I can't wait for the next update!

    ~ PT.
    October 28th, 2010 at 01:38am
  • imyouth-imjoy

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    So, that last chapter? It was only two sentences, and I actually got SAD from it. xD
    October 27th, 2010 at 06:27am