She Was Fading - Comments

Love it! <3 It's completely breaking my heart. It made me think she had leukemia and memories... whoa... SO good!

its so weird that he calls her Caroline now haha.
still really sad, more please!

Caroline and Christian...it has a nice flow to it.
Update soon, plz.

That friend would be me. I'm such a good little advertiser. (:

Caroline actually suits her. I wasn't sure anything but Delilah would fit a girl like that, but I like Caroline. This story is getting sadder and sadder, yet more and more lovely. Update soon. (:

My friend suggested this story to me.
I love it. It's so sad..

I LOVE THIS! Update soon!!

Like i think this is breaking my heart.

its really sad. :/ but i want more!!

I like Caroline.

Wow that was fast. :D

MORE NOW! I just read all 36 chapters you posted. I'm addicted. MORE. Please?

She needs to get better.
That is all.

i really want to know whats wrong with her!! haha

this makes me cry.

btw how old is she suppose to be?

I love the name Christian. Seriously, it's my favorite name for a guy.
Update soon, plz.

I like how you made the comparison between her brother and Tom/Christian. It makes he and Delilah's friendship seem more platonic and brother-sisterly.

O.O
NO.
She can't just die.
And his name is Christian?
I like it.
Update soon?

no dont make her die! :(

where is the tissues when you need them? I am so sad now... :(

Oh my goodness

Dont stop!!! More pleasseeee(:

im dying to know whats wrong with her!!