Plague's Virgins - Comments

oh wow.... cant wait to see what happens, that could be a smart idea, or it could be a bad idea and she could go to gates

Aw man I like this story, to bad there's only 2 chapters left :/

Whoa. I am so glad I came across this...
I wonder how they'll react to that...
I hope she doesn't go to Gates.
He seems.... psycho.

i fucking love this!!
*subscribe*
I cant wait to se how her plan goes!!! xD

oh my fucking god that was exciting! .. Shit.. Ew I think I'd have the same plan if i was gonna be sold to some old guy. I cant wait to see what the outcome is. For some reason I dont think its going to be death... Anyways I love how youve kept this story going so smoothly.

Oh know, I hope she'll be alright.
This story is really good.
Update soon?

OMFU I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

I can't wait till the next chapter!
I love the story!
please update soon!
:)

dude seriously, her plan better work. i feel sorry for these chicks, i would do the same thing man.

I kinda hope her plan works haha XD
Update soon, please? This story is so awesome... :D

damn, this is getting good. i wonder what the buyer will be like

OMG WOW..... that poor girl. She didn't deserve to die she is just scared.

Gosh! You should have seen me while reading this chapter. I was resting my chin on the desk while chewing my nails! This is getting very interesting. Chapter 6 and Chapter 7 Have been my favorite chapters so far. I love the way you tease your readers. You are using a great strategy to keep us hanging on the edge of our seats. Which strategy? Only you know what I am Talking about. ;) But let me tell you that this is the way people should write their stories.
AWESOME FUCKING JOB!
XOXO
Raquel

im curious to see who her buyer is going to be..great update

Damn. Cliffhanger. DAMN YOU.

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!
You just cant leave me hanging!
I HATE CLIFF HANGERS!
Like, you gotta let us know what happens next!
And for some reason, I thought that Jimmy would miraculously be her "buyer."
Haha.

BTW, the whole Matt bit made me "awe" out loud.
Hes caring, yet he cant leave because hes into too much shit.

Hmm what exactly did the nameless girl do? i thought it said she forced herself on Christ... but wasnt sure if that meant like forced herself sexually on him? maybe i am slow but i wasnt quite sure what she did. Uhoh Buyer time... ugh he is probably some disgusting old man. Anyways adding emotions makes your story more relatable so there are bound to be slow chapters.... not necessarily boring :) Update more yay

bahaha period room friends.
But I agree with the emotional thing, you have to have something around it, says the girl who just posted a new story with nothing but sex haha.
and I hate you for leaving me hangin like that *crosses fingers for Johnny Depp* haha

Chapter 7: I wonder what her Buyer looks like?!

even your "not exciting" updates are great! at first i was like this is about her period ... who cares.. but then i read the chapter and it really fit into the story, another example of how theyre virgin slave trainers (crazy original idea by the way) but they arent unnecessarily cruel (except gates). I am DYING for the next chapter. And this chapter made me love Shadows even more than i do. Update soon! :)