I'm glad that her plan work, but I wonder what they're going to do with her now. I really hope that they don't kill her. Great update and I really hope there is a sequel to this. :D
I love it! Personally I think you should do a spin off sequel, so instead of it being about her and Jimmy maybe it being about another girl that Gates falls for because at the moment he seems like a complete asshole and maybe a girl could break him down slightly, but like I said its just my own personal opinion Cant wait for more xXx
YESHHHH!!!!!! SEQUEL!! Haha sorry... Im a silent reader for the time being. We have no internet so I use my phone. But YES!! I soooo want a sequal and I cant believe she did that!! Haha GO MATT! And shes beast for doing that. WOOO! Update :):):):)
I got a sudden hot flash reading that chapter. And let me tell you, I hope that you get an overwhelming amount of responses because I want you to upload the next chapter tonight. This chapter was just so amazing and the "chemistry" between Jimmy and Sophia was over the roof, even if nothing obvious was noted.
YAYY!!! Matt saves the day! hehe I am personally a Shadows fan so I hope he takes her as a slave but I really have NO idea! And i LOVE that. Youre not predictable AT ALL. And alas that makes you a great writer :) I would do very bad things to get you to write a sequel :) Even if it turns out Jimmy takes her and not Matt and even though I'm not really interested in Jimmy stories I would *still* subscribe to that shit and probably love it. Cuz i just love you writing. Sooooo finish this shit soon! hehe *sighs dramatically* I dont know if I will survive the suspense of waiting to find out her fate :D
I literally repeated 'oh my god' the whole time I read this haha, perfection! Matt is so sweet! I like that she learned their real names finally! More more more, I'll just annoy you forever until you do:)
OMG OMG OMG. SHE DID IT!!!!! I hope they don't hurt her too much. I love matt to death but I want her to be Jimmy's slave -flails- and omg i wuld loveeeeeee a sequel
Omg I love the plan! It's so, i don't know what the right word would be, but it's so smart. I can't believe there are only two more chapters! How are you going to end this? I am so intrigued and can't wait for the next update :D
I fucking..... UGH. Two more chapters? NOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Well, as far as my review goes: As always, you never seize to amaze. I love how you write out all thats going on in her head, and I like how you describe each of A7X individually and in their own creepy way. The chapter could have been longer, though nonetheless I am pleased. :)