DEAR LORD!!! Not to sound creepy but I officially love you now for writing this story. This was hands down one of the best, most interesting stories I've read on this site so far. I've read quite a few stories so that's saying a lot. I'm glad she gets to be Jimmy's slave and I can't wait to read the other stories tomorrow.
I just read this entire story....I loved it from start to finish. Good plot, great characters, very descriptive....I will definitely be reading the sequels. =)
Ahhh! Is it only me or was that totally unepected!? xD This is reeeally interesting! I cant wait for the sequel! And also...haha..... I couldn't help but notice the MASSIVE difference beteen Syn in this, and Syn in 'almost easy' and 'such a surreal place'!!!!
Well I love it...... Syn is and a-hole.... Mattie is so sweet and well Jimmy is awesome. I like the last chapter it's one of my favorite. He chose her yeah yeah ^_^
Girl... wow. As my last comment all I got to say is wow... Let me tell you that throughout this story you earned my complete respect as a writer. After this, let me tell you, you must be called a WRITER. I wish you could have seen my face when Jimmy said: "Me." That ending drew a big smile across my face. Congratulations, your work is worth a lot. Finally I would like to thank you; Thank you for giving me (as a reader) an awesome time where I experienced so many emotions, and believe me, that is the best gift a writer can give to his/her reader.
The whole chapter I went back and forth between the thought that she'd go to Matt cuz i'm biased cuz hes my favorite and Jimmy cuz shes into him... When she went to Jimmy i was like THANK GOD *happy dance*. and then i was like wait a minute why am i so happy shes still a slave haha this story is sooo awesome its twisting my thoughts lol.
Oh my God! Yay! She's Jimmy's *does happy-dance around the room* Seriously.. yessss! I can't wait for the sequel! Your writing is really good! I wouldn't want you to change anything about it :)
Yay! She gets to live *dances* and now she belongs to Jimmy. But why do I get the feeling Syn is going to make her life hell still? I can't wait to read the sequel