Quadropy - Comments

I'm doubting that these deaths by fire are suicides, but I wonder why fire is used when there would be much easier methods to murder someone. Probably trying to hide something...A tattoo or something on the skin? Or maybe the murderer just doesn't want the authorities to look beyond the obvious...Maybe they're being killed in other ways (such as poison--LIKE THE CHOCOLATES!) and the bodies are being burned to destroy the evidence...

I'll stop theorizing now. XD

Chapter 23:

“If something really is going on, I don’t want you to get hurt, I don’t want you to end up like all the others,” Spike said, rolling off her and laying down next to her.

“W-What do you mean ‘all the others’?” Ramona asked curiously. She could see that tears had begun to well up in Spike’s eyes and his lower lip began to quiver in fear.

What does he mean? How many?
You always know how to divert the readers' and the characters' attention away from the important questions. :)

Why did Spike take the darn pill?! What would he want to do that for? He knew what would happen, didn't he?

Chapter 23:

“I took my pill yesterday. Alice gave it to me,” Bill insisted, wiping away some of the tears that had formed in the corner’s of his eyes.

“But how did she-,” Ramona began, but stopped and quickly stood up.

HOW?! I think she's making them herself...I think Alice is mentally ill...Maybe she's the one that has all of these phobias. XD

Ugh...Once again you distracted Ramona (this time with her unsuccessful attempted murder [but she doesn't know that])when she was going out to get answers...You sure do know how to build success.

Chapter 23:

Ramona stood aghast as her mother ran off with her father and Tiffany. Ramona took a few steps back before sprinting back to her room. Bill was sitting anxiously by the door to Ramona’s room.

“Am I really sick? Do I need to go to the hospital?” he asked frantically. He’d obviously been eavesdropping.

Bill was seriously adorable there...Just like a little kid. The brother of a friend of mine used to make up mysterious illnesses whenever he didn't want to do his chores...One day his mother decided to take him in to see his aunt, who was a nurse, because his "brain was fuzzy." She diagnosed him with some mythical disease, but he believed her, and was crying because the disease was supposedly fatal. He had his mom call his dad to tell him about it and everything...He got pretty upset before they told him that it was all fake and that he should stop trying to get out of work. End of anecdote. Don't you just love kids?

Where did Mr. K come from at the end? Did he really bite his lips or tongue?

A sequel soon? Remember how you had us guess the meaning of Quadropy? Well I can tell you that Amaranth (besides being an amazing song by the band Nightwish) also means 'deathless' (if you're being liberal...it literally means "unfading" or something along the lines of that...) in Greek and refers to a flower and a red dye. I didn't even have to look that up. This useless piece of trivia has been sitting in my head for years. Please give me cookies...Or an update, which would probably be easier for both of us. XD

this story is amazing. i think it should left to our imaginations. it makes the stories I read work for me. idk its weird haha. but yes this story is amazing.

Gah!!! u dont understand how obsessed i am with this story....i love it so much...me and my friend talks about it all the time....we made a bet on whats gonna happen next...and i won pahahahahahaha okokok enough of the randomness plz update soon ur such an awesome writer <3 hearts

I honestly want to know what Janelle looks like...

Piiictures please :)

Thanks so much for updating! I was looking forward to it :) I KNOW ALICE MUST HAVE SOMETHING TO DO WITH THE FIRE ' SUICIDES '. and I wonder if that's gimme speaking now omg so excited for the next update!

i really love this story and i hope you update soon

YES DAH BITCH IS GONE

i freaking love this storyyy!!!!!!!! its so great! hahaha but how could he forget Dr. Farley committed suicide?! idk about you but i would remember something like that!

One thing I must say: OH MY GOSH!
Dr. Farley committed suicide??? Insane.. And how is Bill... Eh, spike... staying put? I would think that some other guy would want to surface soon...
OOHHH I am so curious... And this is so good...
And also, what if she really is pregnant?? This is what I would like to know...
This is insane and I've been bad for missing so much...
Update soon, this was fantastic, as always!!

*gasp* Egad! Suicide! B-But why?!?

I don't know if you know this but there's another story oddly familiar to yours that just recently showed up on mibba, http://stories.mibba.com/read/346535/Splice/0/ by user "the velvet goat."

Damn! Alice killed Dr. Farley.

HOLY SHIT ON A STICK 0_0 she either killed her self or Alice killed her and made it look like the other way around.....idk which one to pick

I don't think Dr farley killed herself. I think it was Alice!

You're writiing has improved so much Elle! I am so happy for you, that your story is now 10 stars! You are a great writer :) I love this story a lot, and it's really nice to read something that is written so intelligently. It seems as though you really thought this story out, and for that, you're my writing idol! Cheers Elle!

OOOOH SHIZZLENITS :D It's Interesting, and I got more wrapped up into it as I kept on reading. :3

OMW! Spike is at her home! Alice is going to flip out :)

I ♥ it!

Oh,How I love Spike (: