January 30th, 2011 at 01:26am
This is a really great story.
I like the idea, and how you pull it all together. :D
*subscribe*
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January 28th, 2011 at 05:05pm
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Realy, realy, realy awesome. :DJanuary 28th, 2011 at 04:46pm
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I believe the prologue sort of thing was excellent :) I like it!
Halfway down Chapter 1, you forgot an 'e' on the word 'hinge' so it's 'hing' right now. lol. Just thought I'd let ya know!
Love, love, love this story! Can't wait for more :)January 24th, 2011 at 12:38am -
I like this rewrite much better so far. :D I get the feeling tha tyou have a little more of a plan now. :DJanuary 22nd, 2011 at 10:49pm
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I love this story it's so amazing! I am already in love with the superhero! This is truly an amazing story! I'M ALREADY WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE!January 22nd, 2011 at 10:40pm
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superheros and a girl who punches pervy soldiers. me likey =) keep going!January 22nd, 2011 at 10:37pm
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This is wicked awesome. I'd really like for you to keep writing this :DJanuary 22nd, 2011 at 10:13pm
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more?
awesome!
*Subscribing!*January 22nd, 2011 at 09:51pm -
I. Love. You. Out of hiatus?!!!!
Can't wait for more, then!!!
Now, I must go see that update on your profile...:)December 30th, 2010 at 10:50pm -
Agh!!! Hugs, love. I'm not still sure where this is going, but I still like it a lot. :DDecember 29th, 2010 at 06:44pm
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so far, it's very good. i can't wait for moreNovember 19th, 2010 at 11:03pm
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This is really interesting. I can't wait to see where it goes.October 24th, 2010 at 06:08am
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Love this. :D Love you.August 7th, 2010 at 11:45pm
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I just finished chapter 3 and I love it!
I hope you get more ideas soon, cause this is brilliant!
If you get stuck, I'm always here for a brainstorm, ;)
Good Luck!
<3August 7th, 2010 at 04:52am -
This is amazing!
I don't have time right now to read all that you have posted :(
For which I am upset... :(
But I am looking forward to reading more!!
It sounds like an awesome story! :)
I can't wait to read more!
<3August 6th, 2010 at 12:00pm -
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK now I'm doubly wanting more. This is officially one of my fave stories right now (I'm such a geek, I have SOOO many faves it's not even funny) and I'm dying to know what happens.
And I about died when you mentioned Harry Potter's invisibility cloak. I love Harry Potter XDDDD
Until the next one, then!
And I'm so glad that ^^^ liked my idea lolAugust 5th, 2010 at 10:47pm -
I likeeeeeeeeeeee it! Very, very good writing and plot line! Oh my gosh that's such a rarity nowadays it's sad.
But you got it, so it's all good! :D
as far as ideas... well, I like their ^^^ idea of taking women away in the middle of the night, but maybe do that after some more plot development? I dunno.
I'll be eagerly waiting for the next one!August 4th, 2010 at 04:30pm -
I really, really like this, but I don't know what more you could put in and if you don't have any more ideas I'll feel like crying because it's just THAT good...
Maybe soldier reinforcements...? Undercover soldiers that take women away in the middle of the night? IDK but do something because this is really good XDAugust 3rd, 2010 at 10:03pm -
kool. i like it so far. post more as soon as you can. it really good. :DAugust 3rd, 2010 at 09:38pm
In chapter 3, I believe, you have the phrase "moment of loss of sight" and to me that would flow better if it was "momentary loss of sight", but that's just me. I'm not trying to be a nitpicker or anything, just saying. :)
I love this story. But...WHERE'S THE REST?!
Lol. :)
Can't wait for more!