SuperHero - Comments

You've been quite the updater recently :)
Man do I simply love this story. Naming him Hero was awesome just because personally if he told me his name was Hero I would never believe him lol
I can't wait to hear what happens next. It amazing how Hero is showing her all these things she hasn't seen in years. I love the wonder happiness she feels just seeing it.

OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS! Those last two chapters were like a fuckin' movie! (Btw, sorry I didn't get to comment on the last chapter or this one any sooner. I read Mibba stories off my phone, and it was getting fixed at the time.)

But damn, Yuffie! You sure know how to catch a reader's attention. You make us picture the whole story in pur heads so easily.

I really liked a lot of scenes in the past two chapters. Haha! I liked the part where Ellie compared hanging from the ceiling while holding onto wires was like holding onto a chandelier. That pool must have looked really tempting to her. I loved how all the parts made her seem like a secret spy or something; sneaking around private headquarters, crawling into the ceiling, uncovering private (and important!) files. I'm glad masked man was amused with the whole thing. I knew he was watching over her when the rope "magically" appeared, haha.

Nice idea with the whole "SuperHero" assignment. I was wondering what the title actually referred to. You left the story at a pretty suspenseful cliffhanger, though >:/!

I miss Sara :P. I wonder if you'll ever bring her back. It seems like you will since Ellie is trying to locate her.

With all the info you say you're going to reveal in the next chapter, I'm practically on the edge of my seat. This has to be my favorite story of yours so far. TGL and Stray are amazing too! (:

Update when you can! <3

I've actually been dying to learn his name. I just love names...
And I have just a few words to sum up my thoughts on this chapter: Holly crap!

I love you! Hah, I hope that's not as weird as it sounds. :/ You're just an amazing writer! I love this story so much. I was kinda sad that Ronnie died, but it had to be done. I loved your little author's note at the end it was really funny, I kept scrolling down and was like, "where is it?!" Write more and on the quickness! :D

That was intense. Goodness, I was so excited when I saw you updated.
Elena (and you) are so friggin' smart! Her little stunt in the pool are was incredible, very well written and well done!
Your story is amazing, as is your characters.
Poor Ronnie, :( You win some, you lose some.
I cannot wait for the next chapter, eeek! :)
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Chapter 11: I do feel really bad for Ronnie that he died, but SuperHero was in the right to kill him or it could've been much worse. And I WAS RIGHT, ONE OF MY THEORIES WAS RIGHT!!! :DDD

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Hey there :) Okay, so basically you're story is perfect. There's only two things that bother me - number one, the people in 42 protest against the army, kill a bunch of the members (with the help of the masked hero), and manage to save some of their women. So how come this Damon guy (the king) doesn't cut back the rations even more, or do something else to punish them. It just seemed kind of weird to me that after all the trouble the people in 42 caused, life went directly back to normal. Was it because they figured it was punishment enough to take the women? It's a pretty small thing that maybe my logic has over thought.
Then the second thing is, why does the masked guy ask for her to break into the HQ when he could probably do it a hundred times faster and more efficient? Is he still trying to stay hidden or something? And the fact that the piece of rope magically appeared (your hints led me to believe the masked man put it there) also makes me think that he was already in there. Is this purposely part of your plot? Does the superhero want Elena to learn something on her own?
And oh my goodness, but why do I have a feeling that the masked guy actually WAS in Elena's bathroom. and that we was lying about not being there? O.o! Hee hee. He's so charming! I wish I had a superhero that was stalking me! And then finally, I love the complication you included with Ronnie. I wonder what's going to happen to him though, because he saw her face and so he can accuse her. But I don't want him to die! He's oddly innocent, even though he can be a major jerk. Hope you update soon :) Somebody recommended this story to me so that obviously should tell you that you're doing something right ;)

Love this story <3

Chapter 10: Ok so my theories on Project SuperHero are that A.) The savior is an experiment of the army's scientists or B.) The savior is a real hero and the scientists are trying make another SuperHero!!!

woahhhhhhhh....i REALLLY like this story....the layout is cool original and easy to read. i love the story plot...it's suspenseful and just plain AWESOME!!! update update update.....oh and i will be soooooooo depressed if the masked guy isn't as sexyyyy with his mask off as he is with his mask on =J

Loved the last chapter! A great new twist!
Can't wait to read the next update.

I can't decide if it's Superhero that was helping her, or just some suppressed part of her (I don't remember her name... =/)
But I don't really want to believe that, because I've loved that she was just a normal girl, and that it was the secondary character that had the juice. But I don't know
Wait, is it Ellen..? Elena? Ellesomething... Maybe. =/

Your story is absolutely amazing.
Your detail, the way you describe things, you character development, the plot, it's all magnificent and so much fun to read! I love the way you word things and your random physics you throw in there.
You almost had me crying at those first couple chapters. :'( It's so sad about what the Army's doing and everything.
I love the "masked man", I want one for myself, haha. He's so mysterious and awesome.
Elena, my god, a wonderful character. She's just beautiful and super and I want her to be my best friend.
I love your story, and I think I love you too. Keep this up, this is so original and genius! :D

i love this, you need to update! it will sure make everyone smile :)

God, I miss him allready. :)

LOVED IT! It's been a while since you've updated and I'm really glad you're writing more. I feel bad for Ronnie, too. :O what's gonna happen to her when he wakes up & tells the guards what happened?! Superhero time! He might wear a mask but he has hazel eyes, he has to be attractive! I hope you'll write more and soon! :D

This chapter was alright. Not much happened other than Ronnie being an awkwardly horny teen, and Ellie knocking him out. (Props to Ellie for that, by the way! :D Woot! Woot!) I'm curious on what's going to happen in the next chapter though.
Update when you can! <3

An update <3 Yay!(:

Chapter 8: Ok, I gotta admit I do feel kinda bad for that Ronnie kid, but oh well!
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LOVE IT!!!! i think he's a ninja.... lol but thats just me. keep writing i love your stories!!! xD