SuperHero - Comments

Ooooo hidden secrets!!! So I hope your eggs were good but unfortunately they weren't made by Hero :( I bet he makes SuperEggs ;) I really liked this chapter even though I didn't necessarily like Sophia but that's only because I want Ellie and Hero together forever! Haha I wonder though what Hero has up his sleeves with all this mischevious smirks!! I can't wait to see what happens next!

xoxo
Sarah

NO SERA NOOO,
Oh well. I think I like this better than having her fall in love with Damon. Because then you have to ask the question, what was the high and mighty doing with a Slave? Why would he spare his time to socialize enough with her? I do think this is how it should be. And I am so gonna look this guy up...

Oh god, that's really sad :'|

Poor Sera, though the deformity does remind me of something, but i just can't remember what
*pouts*
Gosh I hate it when you see/read/hear something that you know you've see/heard/read before but you just can't remember where it was!!!!!

anyway, awesome update!!!!

Graaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. Damon will be murdered brutally, and they won't have the decency to do it when he's asleep. That would be too kind. Sera's pain and suffering and resulting death will be avenged, and Elena will have a hand in it.

Oddly enough, the thing popped into my head: what if Elena's compatible with the tech? And then I freaked out about even THINKING that way. But then again, I suppose it's not impossible. She could do some research, find out just what type of brain you have to have for compatibility, then she could somehow get herself in the lab for the operation and then break out to REALLY help Hero kick some arse.

I'm almost SCARED that something like that would happen. Haha.

Anywho, I love the story. I was freaked out about the operating room and about what they did to Sera, but then i was mad at them, haha.

The sketches are pretty cool!!! :)

I can't wait to see what comes after this, though. You're still doing AMAZING!!!! xD

Wow. That pretty much describes your story. I never imagined something like this could be on minna. Honestly your story is so incredible I would buy it at a book store and read it ten times over. And you aren't even done with it yet. You are an absolutely amazing writer, superb. I could see your story even turning into a major motion picture. Typically I don't comment on stories with a lot of comments already (I feel like it gets lost in all the comment hubbub) however I couldn't pass up leaving a tidbit :) Your characters are so well described they feel like real people, your setting is amazing to me. How do you do it and how do you do it so well? Saying I love your story is an understatement. I can't wait to see what happens next in the world of Elena and Hero!

xoxo
Sarah <3

Damnit, Damon! Why'd you have to go and let them experiment on Sera -_-. Rawr, Ellie will be avenged.

Hmm, don't know what else to say? What's coming up next ;)?

Chapter 16: Oh my god....how could they do that to those poor, innocent people?!?! That is just so inhuman, disturbing, and disgusting! I hope Hero and Ellie get their revenge...not just for Sera, but for every other person who have had to endure all that pain and suffering for someone else's sick pleasure!

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I can't even...oh my goodness. I feel like crying. That was so morbid and sad and yet, I still loved it. Poor Sera, I thought they were gonna rescue her and...wow. I know all about the Holocaust, sick bastards.

That chapter was flawless. It was gruesome and amazing. It shows the reader a different, more evil side of the Army that we haven't seen. I assumed she would find Sera raped and beaten but you took it to a different level, and I was just like --> Jaw. Drop.

That was magnificent.

On a lighter note: DAMN YOU CAN DRAW. Elena is so pretty and I love how in your sketch she's wearing a Superman costume, lmao. It's really good.

Oh...my God. I didn't think it was possible, but the story just gets better and better with each chapter. I agree with eragorn122: I have a bad feeling about Hero. But nonetheless I love this story so much! Everyday I go to my subscriptions just to see if you've posted again, and I was so excited today when I saw you'd posted :)

Now, to address the main thing on my mind about the latest chapter: the pictures at the bottom. Writing is something I love, but as a fellow artist, I have to say that is my first passion. You are amazing at drawing! I love it! I'd been imagining how Elena might look and you drew out exactly what I've been seeing. Genius. Marvelous. And then it got me wondering if maybe you drew the title picture too. The one with the dark figure bent down in the flaming city. I thought you'd maybe downloaded it, but I now am convinced you drew that as well. Your drawing skills are amazing! Simply indescribable.

I apologize if this entire comment seems weird. But I'm only being honest.

Keep up the amazingly awesome work :)

I have a bad feeling about Hero...

I stumbled upon this story and I just read the first chapter and i'm amazed at how well you write! I can't stop reading this! Great writing seriously! :]

Needless to say, I love this story. But now my worries are plaguing me. Haha.

And at one point, within the first five or six paragraphs (it was in like, the last sentence of the paragraph) you put loosing where it should have been losing. Just so you know. :)

Love it. Can't wait to see more! The suspense may just kill me :)

LOve it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

all i can say it...
awesome :) cant wait till the ball starts rolling again!!
update soon i hope?

Wow...just...damn. this is really freaking good. I discovered it yestereday, and read almost every chapter. I cam back and finished it today. This is so amazing, I haven't the words to describe it. Just...wow.

Chapter 15: Why do I get the feeling that the story told by the old man was a warning to Elena? I'll admit, it's a little creepy!

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The minator story!!!!
I had to lean that story for my history class last year and this year when I started Ancient History when my teacher started to talk about ancient Greek architecture and myths.
it's one of my favourite stories!!!

anway, great chap UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!

That's so weird! I recently watched the movie "The Labyrinth" like two days ago, and now you brought up a Labyrinth in this story :). When I first began watching the movie, I was like, "What the hell is a 'Labyrinth?'" But then, I figured out it's like a maze, right? Hmm, interesting. I also already learned about the story of Icarus a while back, too. But, I vaguely remember it; just the highlights of the story.

I'm wondering what kind of foreshadowing you're using here. Are you making it obvious by saying that Hero and/or Elena are going to fly too close to the sun and...get burned :x? Maybe...maaaybe not.

*sing-song voice*They finally found Seraaa, they finally found Seraaa!*dances like a goof* ... *clears throat* Sorry about that o_o. Haha, but yeah, they finally found her; I could just cry ;'D. Are they gonna break her out along with the rest of them :O? I doubt they'd be able to at the moment, but it doesn't hurt to wonder ;).

Update when you can! <3

WHY ARE YOU SO AMAZING?
Loveddd the update. Excited for more! :D