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  • Nope3

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    Updated! :)
    October 15th, 2015 at 08:37pm
  • Nope3

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    this is awesome write some more :)
    March 26th, 2012 at 08:00pm
  • RandaRue22

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    I'm in love with this story so far and can't wait for more!
    April 3rd, 2011 at 07:52pm
  • Kitten_

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    chapter 9 plZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz i LoVe this storyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 7th, 2011 at 02:53am
  • ReadyToFall22

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    please update this soon!!!!!! This is literally the BEST Avenged Sevenfold story I've read on here!
    February 28th, 2011 at 09:39pm
  • Little Miss Zacky V.

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    This is a really cut story (: I like it.
    Update soon please? And I'm gonna guess that it's Shadz that wipes the tear. Or maybe Zacky...
    February 27th, 2011 at 05:30am
  • ReadyToFall22

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    I love this! It's the best ax7 story ive read on here
    February 9th, 2011 at 11:54am
  • kierstlovesyou

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    Pleaase write more this story is amazingg.
    January 13th, 2011 at 06:11pm
  • burning.

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    Hmmm...
    Well, first off, great story :)
    The plot line is very original and I would have never guessed that she'd be getting kidnapped.
    A few things, though. I know that some people aren't normally the greatest, but you might want to spell-check your stuff because I found quite a few mistakes in each chapter.
    Just sayin'.
    December 4th, 2010 at 07:26pm
  • CagedBarbWire

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    Ohmygod. I kinda. love this story. I've actually fell in love with the story! I've always loved Syn and Zacky being in control, and.... *sexes story*
    November 19th, 2010 at 06:08pm
  • BiteMe_doll

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    hey...cant w8 for the next chapter...!!!
    :P
    October 29th, 2010 at 12:34pm
  • chasethecountylines;

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I RANDED OUT OF STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD MORE!!!!!!
    October 24th, 2010 at 05:55am
  • nana_loves_you

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    OH MY FREAKING GOSH I RAN OUT OF STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALL WANNA KNOW WHO WHIPED HER TEAR!!!!!!!! AND I BECAUSE I JUST LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL LOVE YOU foREVer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <333333
    October 19th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • yellowjellybean14

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    REALLY wish the chapters were longer, what will syn do with her since she is just a kid, i did not like that he branded a kid :( update soon...
    October 19th, 2010 at 01:24am
  • lexyavalos

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    lol i love your story how wierd is it that you red mine and i read yours? lol
    October 15th, 2010 at 02:23am
  • violetriddle

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    ... Did Synny do it???
    I HOPE SO!!!!!
    AND **** WRITE MORE SO I CAN READ IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
    Don't worry I didn't say anything in those stars I just felt like putting them!!!
    ... I'm gonna comment on your profile so you will write more... That sounds GOOD...
    Okay?
    Okay I'm gonna go do it right now
    I just have to submit this.
    October 3rd, 2010 at 02:41am
  • Mrs.A7X!!!

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    I Iove this story!!! Update soon plz!!!
    October 2nd, 2010 at 05:59pm
  • justhannah;

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    Aw no. <:| They need to save her mamaa!
    September 26th, 2010 at 04:18am
  • xXcrazy-desiXx

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    looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it. how bout jimmy or brain? anywho love it!
    September 14th, 2010 at 03:34am
  • AlmostLovelyDisaster

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    like it a lot ^^ update soon please
    September 14th, 2010 at 02:49am
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