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Updated! :)

this is awesome write some more :)

I'm in love with this story so far and can't wait for more!

chapter 9 plZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz i LoVe this storyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!

please update this soon!!!!!! This is literally the BEST Avenged Sevenfold story I've read on here!

This is a really cut story (: I like it.
Update soon please? And I'm gonna guess that it's Shadz that wipes the tear. Or maybe Zacky...

I love this! It's the best ax7 story ive read on here

Pleaase write more this story is amazingg.

Hmmm...
Well, first off, great story :)
The plot line is very original and I would have never guessed that she'd be getting kidnapped.
A few things, though. I know that some people aren't normally the greatest, but you might want to spell-check your stuff because I found quite a few mistakes in each chapter.
Just sayin'.

Ohmygod. I kinda. love this story. I've actually fell in love with the story! I've always loved Syn and Zacky being in control, and.... *sexes story*

hey...cant w8 for the next chapter...!!!
:P

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I RANDED OUT OF STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD MORE!!!!!!

OH MY FREAKING GOSH I RAN OUT OF STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON I REALL WANNA KNOW WHO WHIPED HER TEAR!!!!!!!! AND I BECAUSE I JUST LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I WILL LOVE YOU foREVer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <333333

REALLY wish the chapters were longer, what will syn do with her since she is just a kid, i did not like that he branded a kid :( update soon...

lol i love your story how wierd is it that you red mine and i read yours? lol

... Did Synny do it???
I HOPE SO!!!!!
AND **** WRITE MORE SO I CAN READ IT I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
Don't worry I didn't say anything in those stars I just felt like putting them!!!
... I'm gonna comment on your profile so you will write more... That sounds GOOD...
Okay?
Okay I'm gonna go do it right now
I just have to submit this.

I Iove this story!!! Update soon plz!!!

Aw no. <:| They need to save her mamaa!

looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it. how bout jimmy or brain? anywho love it!

like it a lot ^^ update soon please