Welcome to the family - Comments

I like this story, it's good so far. Yeah, in the chapter before the last, you said he had a license but in the last chapter you said he didn't. You may want to change that. Just sayin'. Oh, by the way, how old is the girl? 15? 16?
Continue on with this story, please.

Oh shit. She's fucked.
By the way, you mentioned an ID in the last one, but said there was none in this one.
But besides that, fantastic. :)
Xoxo. Tina.

So far so good I like it
but you put claimed instead of climbed for when she was going in the roof

OOOh this is really interesting. Very different. I like that she doesnt know who he is. I wonder what shes going to do with his wallet and how they meet again. Nice!

lol i loved it. damn i wonder what syn would do if some one really did try to jack him..... i just so happen to live in HB come over when hes off tour and well find out. j/k
yeah that woud be wierd two fan girls meeting on mibba in cunspiricy to steal synyster gates wallet...... kinda creepy now that i think aboout it.... uh lets forget i mentioned that lol
-steph

I'm definitely interested in this story :)
I can't wait for more so please update soon <3
Xoxo. Tina.

Im kind of interested in seeing how this turns out hope you update soon