Stay Away From the Haunted Heart - Comments

Please, make Gerard remember why he shouldnt' be with Bert!! I'm glad you updatet, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter : D xx

Love it <3 please update soon :)
Please dot let Gerard get with Bert :( and make him remember everything

I love this story! And I can just imagine something triggering Gerard's bad memories and freaking out after it comes back to him. Bert is EVIL. And poor Frankie D:

You have to update or I will kill your toys and steal your cookies. Ahhhh fuck you bert!!!!! Poor frankie:'( I wanna hug him so bad.

I love this <3 please update soon :)

Gerard needs to remember, or at least realize that Bert's a cunt
Whatever you do, don't make Gerard fall in love with Bert. Please don't...

@ RayToroLeFro
Aw, thank you for still following this :) I'm going to try and update a lot sooner and a lot more :D I'm really glad it made your day :)

You really have to update this story more often, I love it so much! I can relate to almost all the things Gerard is feeling. And you write so beautifully painfully. Thank you so much. xx

you just made me the happiest person in the world. I had a shit day then you updated out of no where! omg thank you so much:3

~LeFro

Love it <3 please update soon :)
Please make Gerard start remembering :)
Don't you fucking dare make Gee fall in love with Bert. I will literally murder myself if you do, so don't.

Love it <3 please update soon :)
Hopefully Gerard remembers some stuff, and realizes that he's in love with Frank

I'm not too sure on how I feel about Gerard's memory loss. I mean, if it's only five years shaved off of his memory then he'll probably remember the abuse, going to the insane asylum, and that doctor. What's up with that doctor? Suspicious, suspicious..

If Gerard were to ever recover his memory again I'm afraid that he'll accuse Frank of taking advantage of him. What about everyone else around him? Would they take advantage of him? And because he does act like a different person when he goes back home (assuming that he does return home rather than staying in England) would other people take advantage of him or try to beat the (excuse my language please) fucking shit out of him? In my head he was known for being a fucking badass, and now that he has a different personality I'm curious as to how that will affect everyone around him. I wonder how Frank's boyfriend will react to it.

I have to say that my favorite scene is in one of the earlier chapters. It was in chapter four when Gerard saves Frank from Ethan. I love this line "that's right, the fucking faggot knows how to fight." Had the scene ended there it would have still been great, but no, Gerard does something unexpected. He doesn't just kiss Frank, no, he's fucking better than that, he dips and then kisses Frank. Holy hell. Then he keeps his arm situated around Frank, and whether it's implied in the story or not that move has an undertone of possessiveness, kind of like a "bitch, he's mine and if you fuck with what's mine I'll fuck you up." Then the threat is delievered, something that sends chills down my spine (in a good way) "mess with him again and you're dead". Not many people can pull that line off. Not many people can pull Gerard's type of character off, and I'm not just reffering to the mask he puts on. I know that chapter is so much older and it would be better to talk about the things I loved in your more recent chapters, but fuck, that one scene has been imprinted in my mind since I read it. It's terrible because I'll be in my classes doing my work like a good student then my mind replays that scene and I'm in lala land for a good portion of the class.

I love that you don't reveal everything in the first few chapters, instead you slowly leek out information and we slowly see the deeper parts of Gerard and Frank's mind. We go deeper into their thoughts, their emotions, and their lives. I don't think we knew anything about Frank's life until lately, and Gerard's feelings about Frank have been showing themselves on a deeper level than just a "I like him as a casual fuck buddy."

Speaking of Gerard's feelings for Frank..the letter. Oh Isis. The fucking trouble making letter. I was expecting Gerard to blow up on Frank. I was expecting Frank to feel more hurt about what Gerard said when he denied that he loves Frank. I'm still kind of wondering why Frank did react the way he did. Almost like it didn't phase him.

I'll end this silly rambling right now. The point is that this story is unique and intriguing. I'm very curious as to what will happen to all the characters (well, almost all. I don't care much about what happens to your character Bert because like the jackass I am I simply just don't like him). I hope that you can find the time to update soon, and good luck in your classes! Thank you for posting what you have so far, I appreciate it. =]

It' s kinda sad that Gerards complete personality is like changing. But I wanna know if everything is going to be fine with those two. So please please keep on writing no matter how busy you are ;) !
I love this super cool story so please please keep on doing it!!

Love it<3 please update soon :)
I think you should make it so that Gerard falls in love with Frank and they become boyfriends and live happily ever after and have lots of sex. Lots. Of. Sex.

I agree with kayylloovveee, you should update. soon. no joke.

I think im going to have to stab you in the face if you dont update soon... Well maybe not cause then it'd take even longer for an update... So update... please?

Also..
As fucked up as it sounds, I don't want Gerard to have his memory back.. I don't want him to remember his past, I think he deserves happiness and maybe not remember how fucked up he was back then will help with that.
I don't know.
But I hope the story becomes happy now! <3

......
Did you really just end it there???
Why?!!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!
I am loving this so far and I need more.

Update soon!

Much love,
-SapphireSky
xoxo

Update...
Pwwwwweeeeeeease

please dont wait so long to update again, this story is so good

Pleaseee, let Gerard get his memory back!!