Stay Away From the Haunted Heart - Comments

  • KilljoyScarecrow

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    I don't even know what to comment on first! It was all amazing.
    Gerard finally kind of realising that it hurts Frank when he leaves - It's possible that Frank has always looked disappointed but only now is Gerard realising that.
    Frank wants to help Gerard so badly, but doesn't know how any more. Oh it's all amazing.
    Gerard needs to realise he really is in love with Frank :)
    Great update! Can't wait for more :D
    April 18th, 2011 at 01:58pm
  • KilljoyScarecrow

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    Wow. This story is so good. It's disappointing that there aren't more comments cus it definitely deserves more!
    The whole idea of this story is so interesting. The conflict of character - Gerard's mental struggle is something I can relate so strongly with, although I hate to admit it. But I can and that's one of the things I like about this story.
    Frank's always their for Gerard - It must be hurting him but it shows how much he loves him.
    Gerard must love Frank too, but is too scared to admit it.
    Ah, it's all great. I can't wait to see where this story will go next!
    April 16th, 2011 at 06:01pm
  • Just.a.Kid

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    poor frankie =[
    and... WHY AM I ALMOST THE FUCKING ONLY ONE COMMENTING ON THIS!?!?!? This deserves a lot more O.O I'll try to remember to mention this story the next time I update mine... But I'll probably forget. (just like the previous time -.-')
    Loved the chap ^^ And I can't wait for more!
    March 31st, 2011 at 11:11pm
  • julielikesrainbows

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    IM ADDICTED! WHEN ARE YOU POSTING ANOTHER ONE!!??!! ima go insane!
    January 12th, 2011 at 01:11am
  • Just.a.Kid

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    Wooo! GO GERARD!!!! =D
    Piss Quinn of as much as you can ^^
    More soon? =D
    November 28th, 2010 at 10:26pm
  • Just.a.Kid

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    Poor Gerard =[ It's good he opened up to Frankie. He needs to get his life back on trail, rather than doing drugs and fuck random people (or people called "Bert") xD He can only fuck Frankie (a)
    And I still don't understand why you still aren't getting any more comments... This story is worth so much more! I'll post a link in one of my stories, if I don't forget it >< (I tend to forget a lot...)
    Love this =] Update soon? 0=D
    November 8th, 2010 at 01:00pm
  • Just.a.Kid

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    Tell me... WHY aren't you getting more comments!? This should get A LOT more! Seriously...
    I love this =] And I hope Gerard will overcome his fears and talk to Frankie about everything.
    I just realised... This is REALLY weird if you see it from Frankie's POV... Gee needs help, he is acting like he'll spill some big secret. And then he asks frankie to top... I mean, what's he thinking right now?
    I think I'll know after reading the next chapter, am I right? Please update soon! 0=D
    September 27th, 2010 at 08:57pm
  • Losing.Alice

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    I read the summary and chapter titles and y'know what I said ?, out loud too lol, "I like it."
    So I'll go back and read s'more and hope to prove that my hypothesis is true.
    September 26th, 2010 at 05:32pm
  • Just.a.Kid

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    tutut.. *shakes head slowly* Gerard, gerard... You shouldn't bottle your feelings up. Talk with Frankie! He'd love to listen to you...

    I'd love to read more soon =] And have fun in London! =D
    September 1st, 2010 at 12:45am
  • Just.a.Kid

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    WOOO!
    I stole your comment virginity! =D
    I don't get why you didn't get any comments on this story, because I think it's awesome! =]
    I really like the way you set your characters. And if I may give you some critisism (I don't mean it badly) but maybe you could write the rest of the day too. Err... that's not really clear is it? What I mean is, you only write things that are in a direct form important for the story. I'd like to read more from what Frankie does when he isn't with Gee, but with Quinn or someone else. And the same counts for Gerard.

    Well, I've subcribed and I'd love to get an update =D
    August 30th, 2010 at 08:31pm