Ten Zillion Fireflies - Comments

Aww!
Cam :]
I loved the update!
Update soon!
<3

awwwwwwww that was too cute!
I'm sooo glad that she's giving Cam a chance. He's a sweetie. :)
Beautiful.

I love this!
it's amazing!
update soon pweez!
=]

Love it!!!!!! =)

I love the story friend. I found some typing errors though just so ya know(=. Take your time, it's going awesome! If you quit this, I will so murder you in my sleep and kick you in reality. -exits dramatically-

She deffenitly likes Cam again i think
I like this story, its really good :]
they kissed :O
yay date! and aww she was like so worried he wouldn't come xD
aww he gave her flowers <3
yay! so there is some romance <3 good :]

almost cried in the begining.
very good.
but, i was a bit shocked with the relationship between her and Cam...i don't know her feelings for him that well... could you describe it a bit more in the next chapter?
but this is amazing, you are very talented.
wish i could write like you.

Some of this, especially the second chapter was hard for me to read. I have a brother, we were extremely close, and long story short he left us. He talks to me occasionally. But it's forced. It hurts because he meant the world to me and now he is out, enjoying the world without a thought about his sister. So some of this I could relate to.
Your story is well written but not necessarily done in a style I like. Which is perfectly fine because you obviously love what you do and however it is you choose to do it is up to you (:

I really like this story, normally I don't read stories that involve cutting. Mainly cuz the ones that I came across were all very descriptive and it just made me cringe every time I read it. I like this one though cuz It is very emotional and very mysterious in a way that we the readers are not fully aware of all that's going on and I like how we kinda learn as we go. Keep up the good work, I will definitely be subscribing. Please take a look mine and comment!

Great story!
Update soon?

Wow.
I'm really choked up on words right now.
This kind of reminds me of when I use to cut.

Great story!
So much emotion!

I like this.
It sort of reminds me of my life.
Well, the begining of chapter one anyways.
Hahaa.

This is soo sad...but I'm really liking it :D I like mystery that has to unravel itself, with the whole Brendon thing...

(: OMG

to everyone who has commented!!!
I LOVE YOU ALL

(: whoa
i mean really.
I never imagined that it would become this popular this fast
:) and you have all been soo nice.
you guys make my heart smile

chapter 1:
oh the beginging isnt too good for Madelynne :( poor thing
Bren and her seem really close :) but i have a bad gut feeling that he commited suicide
she cuts, i kinda saw that coming though
this story is kinda sad :C
chapter 2:
ohh who is Cam? I wanna know wat happend to Bren!!
I think Cam and Madelynne are gonna fall in love, but thats prob just me
I was right, he did commit suicide, or he died, maybe drunk driving incident?
her father is gonna leave her, in an empty house!?!?! wtf!!
i bet she'll stay with Cam...... or Ammiee
well, he is dead, which means he can be with Carly, i mean that's at least one up to the situation
chapter 3:
how the hell is she being selfish, her mom is a dumbass
i hope MayJay moves in with Cam, I honestly do
i hope they can get on a good note, and grieve together :(
good ending, i cant wait!
*subscribes*

I love it. It's emotional and very well written I can't wiat for the next chapter. :)

I like it, can't wait to read what happens.

I'm so glad you commented my page, because this story is freaking beast.
Can't wait for more. :3

This is really good. Keep it up, update soon :)

Well...I like it for the moment. It is very well written and it has a very touching background (not the layout's background; the main character's background.)

I hope to see more soon.