Ten Zillion Fireflies - Comments

very awesome. more please?

MORE.

nuff said

Anxious to know how Brendon died. :)

This story is so brilliant. so full of emotion and truth, i've only tried cutting 2 when my grandad and grama passed away i was always close to my grandad i was his little girl i actually looked alot like him but this story gives so much understanding to what people go through and you really have a true gift of writing i will definatly keep reading to find out more but please update soon. You are amazing .xxxxxxxxxx

I told you I loved you but you walked away!

Hey this story is full with emotion, and I love your story. I do plan on keeping up with this because I would like to see how he died and how she gets through this. You have a gift of writing and I hope you pursue it.

I love this! It sounds so sad :( I feel bad for her.
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Wow, I really like this. It is touching how close she and her brother were. The story has a realness to it. She is really relatable. I can't wait until you write more!!! :)

Cool :)
Very well-written story that
touched my heart.

This is amazingly sad!!! DX!!!! I just want to jump in there and give her a big hug, but it's just not possible because it's a story. DX!!!
I don't like the parents. They're basically completely giving up and leaving her to do everything herself. I like the journaling and how close it keeps her to her brother.
Very well written. The emotion just flows through your words and it's amazing. You truely have a gift. :) good luck with everything, and I'll be sure to keep up with this. I pretty much need to see her happy now.

So far, the story is incredibly well-written. The pain this girl is feeling just flows off the screen, you can really feel what she is. She lost someone extremely important to her, and it's obvious that she's fighting to keep her head above water everyday. Love it, more soon?

I actually quite love this story, it reminds me kind of what i went through a while ago with all the cutting and stuff.
I can only imagine how hard it would be to lose a twin, I don't think I could go on after that.

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I love it!!! it very intersting!!!!

very emotional,. and I like that the reader doesn't know everything ^^

This is interesting. :) I hope the readers will find out some more information though. xD :)

Ah, the second chapter tied together some of the gaps.
I'm quite anxious to hear more about what will be approaching.

The first chapter is intense and very descriptive.
Thus far, I think it's pretty interesting and attention grabbing to say the least.
Off to read the second chapter, now.

This looks like it could be interesting :) But um, the layout detracts from the story. Maybe I just find dots dizzying? Anyway, continue with the story pwease.

Love itt!!!! :)