September 1st, 2010 at 01:36am
La Vie En Rose - Comments
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YESYESYESYESYES!!!! THEY KISSED, EPICNESS!!!!! I seriously can't wait to see how this little romance blossoms. :DSeptember 1st, 2010 at 01:19am
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I can't wait to read it! And I can't wait to pee my pants... lolSeptember 1st, 2010 at 01:05am
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(page claim)September 1st, 2010 at 12:39am
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haha great update - looking forward to the second one!
sounds intriguing =]September 1st, 2010 at 12:39am -
I feel horrible because every time I read this I forget to comment.
But I seriously LOVE this. It's amazing :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!August 31st, 2010 at 01:29am -
Update soon! This story is too cute, I can't get enough!!! :)August 30th, 2010 at 11:57pm
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oh my god,
too funny.
i laughed so hard.
john just needs to jump her already!!
can't wait for more :)August 30th, 2010 at 10:44pm -
I found this story yesterday and I really liked it, then today I finally got to finish reading what I hadn't yesterday and saw the link for Adorable by Artist vs Poet. That alone made me LOVE this story!
But this story is adorable as hell (hehe) and I hope you update really soon!!August 30th, 2010 at 04:06pm -
Love love love love love love love etc. =)
I hope you know I whore this story likes it's a cheep, good prostitute haha I love it.
My warm fuzzy kittens and puppies feeling has evolved and added smiles to the list. I love her being with John. I wish he'd like... Suddenly kiss her and pull back and be all sorry... I don't know what came over me. Then she could jump his bones and have a mini o'callaghan running around. It'd be a cute ass baby!August 30th, 2010 at 10:02am -
Oh my gosh!! That was funny!! The drunkenness of Kenny and Garrett was hilarious!! I think I find it even more enjoyable because I have a friend who drunkenly confesses her love to anybody within a ten foot radius, so I find it easily relatable. Haha.
As for John and Gigi, I don't know why, but I was fully expecting John to have pulled some swift move and lumped the drunko's into the same bed so he could make his move on G. But alas, nada. Maybe next chapter there'll be some sort of lovin'?August 30th, 2010 at 08:00am -
O'Callywagon! Oh my god I was dying! That's too good. You write drunkenness so well.August 30th, 2010 at 06:10am
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I absolutely love this.
I can't wait for the next chapter (:August 29th, 2010 at 10:19pm -
your story is amazing :D
I love it!
their relationship is so cute<3August 29th, 2010 at 08:48pm -
I loved It! I can't wait to read more, and have more laughs. It's a cute story. :)August 29th, 2010 at 07:07pm
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i loove this story,
your writing is very good.
can't wait for moreAugust 29th, 2010 at 04:46pm -
I feel like, even though its only been a short time, your writing has progressed since the beginning. I read all ten chapters in once sitting and then the following four as you updated them. And now that the plot is starting to pick up I felt the need to drop you a comment!
I really like what you have so far, I like your use of imagery when it comes to actions. A little constructive criticism for you is to maybe use some of that same imagery to describe sights as well? Just cause I know I would have loved to see what Gigi saw when she looked out the window.. Does that make sense?
Like I said, I really like what you have so far, and the way you've started to incorporate songs into the chapters now too is a really good idea! Can't wait to read more! :)August 29th, 2010 at 11:08am -
You know, nothing and I mean NOTHING has ever made me want my ex boyfriend back. He was a sweetie, always too sweet for me. Seeing John makes me want a sweet guy back. Curse you!!
I love this story, though. =) <3 makes me all warm and fuzzy and filled with kitties and puppies when I read it. Update soon? Please? Pretty please? I'll beg on my hands and knees!!! I swear I'll do it. I'm not even joking. Haha
Loving this story <3August 29th, 2010 at 08:52am -
I adore this story. I adore it so much that I'm commenting it with my piece of crap phone. so please, keep up the good work. :)August 28th, 2010 at 10:07am
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great chapter, of course. I got back from their concert and got an email that this was updated and just had to read it before I went to bed. My sister totally scared the hell out of John at the meet and greet, it was awesome. anyways, can't wait for an update!
oh and I love Michael Buble! haha.August 25th, 2010 at 11:10am
i couldn't stop smiling, it hurt.
awesome updates :)