What They Don't Know Won't Hurt Them - Comments

Unbelievable story. I couldn’t stop reading it, even foregoing sleep so i could keep reading.

I've been meaning to read this story for awhile and I finally got around to it. This story was so dramatic and I loved every chapter. You did a great job =)

I really enjoyed this. It was all so dramatic and kept me on my toes, but it still found a way to be super heartwarming. You are honestly my favourite author on mibba and I just thought I would let you know. :D

Oh my gosh, what a sweet ending! I loved it!! <3

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
whatta cute ending! i loved it
so romantic
and i love babies!
very good job, pheeb :)

I looooved that ending:) it was really fantastic

I'm so sorry that this took so long to get to you. Things have just been so busy and even ten minutes in front of a computer is enough to make my head feel like it's going to explode :(

Selfishly speaking, I couldn't have asked for a better end to this story. I was just so honoured that you made me a character in this and not only put me with Max, but gave the two of us such integral parts in Jordan and Piper's lives. From the brother/sister relationship that PL and Jordan had, to Max being entrusted with such a secret that it nearly cost him anything that mattered in his life, to all those girlie moments with the two girls. It really meant a lot to me that you included me that much. I've never even had a story or even a character created for me, so I really appreciate it!! And I couldn't have asked for anything better than having the ending take place at ' my' wedding :)

It's good to hear that Drew is doing so well. Being away from Pittsburgh and surrounded by such a solid, caring family has done wonders for him. Now he has a true mother and father-esque support system; people that love him and care about him and have his back no matter how tough things get. It's definitely what he needed. And after raising four boys of their own, Linda and Henry are the perfect choice to send Drew to. They know how to deal with anything and everything, I imagine.

Jordan needed some private time with his girl...does not surprise me at all ;) It's really, really sweet to see how much they love and adore each other. And how their hormones are still out of control with one another. I so love them together.

Max the nervous groom. He's adorable. I love how you give him all these different facets to his personality other than goofball, pervy womanizer. All the stories I read, he's always the same. He's hilarious and charming and bangs anything that walks with a wiggle, yet he has absolutely no other personality traits that would draw someone in. You make him seem human. That he has sides that he most likely keeps hiding from everyone until he feels absolutely comfortable with someone and trusts them completely. I love that while he's this notorious manwhore and he's confident and attractive, he has this moments of insecurity. Especially when it comes to his personal life. It makes him seem more real that a woman has that kind of hold on him. And that he's nervous and scared and needs that reassurance from someone that things are going to be okay. That moment with Jordan...while small...was really touching.

Bruno :) You know I love me some Bruno.

The wedding was short and sweet and it was interesting to see the other guys' emotions. I giggled when the kiss just went on and on and on. Seemed like a Max thing to do lol And Bruno's 'not time for the honeymoon yet' was even funnier.

PL always knows the right things to say. And now there's a bun in the oven? Someone wasn't careful ;) That kid is going to have an amazing life. His parents love each other to the end of the earth yet they're wild and crazy all at the same time lol

The moment in the fountain was so precious. They're such a lovely couple and I'm glad we got a sense of how far they've come and how the ordeal two years before strengthened how they feel for one another. And while Jordan's proposal was spur of the moment, it was perfect all at the same time. So glad she said yes!!

This story was my absolute fave. Not just of your works, but on this entire site. Thanks so much for sharing it with us and for letting me be such a big part!

<3

:'] that had to be the best ending/epilogue eveeeerrrrr!!!!
You did so well on this story!
I absolutely loved the last scene. It definitely took me by surprise when Jordan asked Piper to marry him. I thought he would earlier in the chapter, but for some reason i just did not see it coming.
BUT IM SO HAPPY. hahaha, reading this cheered me up. :P
Congrats on finishing :D

Thats was so cute! I loved it! :)

This was a great story. I'm glad you ended it with Max and PL's wedding, because it's always entertaining with those two. That kid is going to have an interesting life.

Ha, Mario Lemieux doesn't put me in mind of someone who would do the open up a can of whoop ass route, but that scene made me giggle. Especially the part where he called in old man Ray's wife. Would love to be a fly on the wall for that one, except he's such a bastard that he probably just lied to her. I would die laughing if he were forced to say, "Mario called you in here because I'm a rapist. Just thought you should know!" or some shit like that. Oh well. You can't win them all.

Glad Alexa worked things out too. She deserved better than just being a cougar.

So I really really REALLY enjoys this story. It's sad to see it end. You are an amazing writer and I'm glad to have found thus story. Keep it up, you got talent!

LOVE <3

Loved this story. Jordan & Piper were great & I'm sad it's over. Great job!

I loved the epilogue. It was a great ending. At first I thought it was going to be Jordan and Piper's wedding but I liked it even better that it wasn't. The fountain scene was so romantic and it was a beautiful ending. I'm sad this is over now too, but I'm ready for Engo!

Loved the ending! It was so beautiful! :)

oh my gosh that was so freaking cute! the wedding was so perfect<3
i want a moment like that in the fountain:} soooo adorable. amazing job

aw, that was an adorable ending!

Loved this. They are so cute. Is there going to be a sequel? Just wondering cause this is awesome

Why do you insist on making me bawl like a baby? Seriously awsome ending!!! Maybe hopefully a sequel!? Possibly? Like a Max sequel, or even just playing the wedding sequel. I just loved this story a lot! Best Jordan story yet!

awww, that was such a good ending to an amazing story!!!
very well done!! and i can't wait to read more of your stuff