May 22nd, 2011 at 03:44pm
What They Don't Know Won't Hurt Them - Comments
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Ahhh, I loved it! The way it all tied in at the end...perfect. Love love loved it! I'm so sad to see it end :(May 20th, 2011 at 07:20pm
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Sooo amazing!! I loved this story so much!! <3May 20th, 2011 at 05:03am
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Loved the ending of this story and I look forward to reading your other stories :)May 19th, 2011 at 09:15am
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I loved it. I loved it so, so much. Mario to the rescue!! It's always Mario to the rescue. : )
<3 <3
Congratulations on graduating, too!!! :DMay 19th, 2011 at 04:59am -
this was so perfect and amazing and sweet<3
and ohmygosh they has sex at the melon arena!!
anyway, fantastic job. You're a brilliant writer :]May 19th, 2011 at 12:25am -
I'm utterly destroyed that this story is over but it couldent have ended in any better way. Absolutely amazing. I won't lie, a few tears escaped as I finished that last few sentances. I don't even know what else to say!
Ps- congrats on graduation!!May 18th, 2011 at 11:39pm -
I loved this story. Jordan & Piper were great together. I hope you post the epilogue!May 18th, 2011 at 12:29pm
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You're an incredible writer, all your stories are amazing :D Jordan just made me fall in love with all over again, fighting for Piper and what he is doing for Drew... it is amazing :)
Congratulations on graduating college !!!May 18th, 2011 at 12:04pm -
your story was amazing. fantastic. and awesomely great.
lol, i was really skeptical on how much i would like the story at first,
but you're a great author so I thought Id stick around
and im freakin glad i did. Congrats on graduating college!!!!
and finishing this story!!!!
my favorite part was when Mario Lamieux... (sp?) came out of nowhere!
hah, i loved it. it was like the cheese on top of some delicious pasta.
please post an epilogue!!!!!
[sorry im hungry] but yeah. you did an awesome job.
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I loved this story so much. So sad to see it end.
I think their should be a sequel or spin off about Jordan and Piper's journey now thatthey are officially together. Or maybe it could take Place in the future where they are married and about to have children. :]May 18th, 2011 at 03:46am -
You had me bawling like a fricken baby!!! Seriously!! one of the best Jordan Staal stories Ive ever read, and Ive read alot Please update fieghing maturity, I want to see what happens with caity and eric, and lily and jordanMay 18th, 2011 at 03:24am
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I'm finally caught up with this story! :)
Aw, I'm glad they had a happy ending. And I really liked the fact that you got Mario to sort everything out and also that the old pervert got what he deserved in the end.
I loved the story.May 18th, 2011 at 01:31am -
I can't believe its over. It was great. Can't wait for the last update. :)May 18th, 2011 at 01:16am
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I loved this story and i especially loved how you ended it. I can't wait fot the epilogue. For some reason i knew that you were going to get Mario involved somehow.I LOVED IT ALL!!!!May 18th, 2011 at 01:07am
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I love love LOVED this story! The ending was absolutely perfect!May 18th, 2011 at 12:49am
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I loved the way it ended. I think that it was perfect, it seemed to fit. So glad that Mario was there to help out in the end. I'll be honest, I didn't think Alexa would be the one to tell Mario, but I'm glad she did. Great work!!May 18th, 2011 at 12:01am
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Fantastic job on this story! I loved it! :D Oh and congratulations on graduating college! I graduate high school on the 27th! :DMay 17th, 2011 at 11:21pm
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YES YES YES YES YES!!!!! Phoebe that was just EPIC! I loved every bit of it, and although I'm sad that it's over it has been one of my favorite stories that you have done. :) I can't wait to see how it REALLY ends! You always seem to come up with some awesome twist that we never expect and I can't even begin to imagine what it will be. And CONGRATULATIONS on your graduation!!! YOU GO GIRL! I just hope you keep writing your awesome stories. Sorry it's been a while since I've commented.....I've been a little busy becoming a new grandma! My daughter had a beautiful baby girl - TEGAN LENIA - and she is the most adorable thing I have ever seen! :))) So needless to say every moment of my spare time at home has been taken up with loving my little doll. But I had to let you know how much I loved this, although you already know how I feel about your writing. I'll be waiting on the epilogue and then.........BRING ON ENGO!!!!!!!May 17th, 2011 at 11:17pm
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My favorite story so far(:May 17th, 2011 at 10:25pm
Drew is such a good kid. He's confused and misunderstood and he's had such a hard life at such a young age. And he was born addicted. Which just adds even more health and psychological problems. Things like ADHD and personality and social disorders. No wonder he ended up getting himself into trouble. I'm glad that Jordan's found something and somewhere for him to go. To just get away from it all and start over. That's what the kid needs. Maybe even some therapy to learn how to deal with the problems that these types of kids have. That could probably be good for him too.
I love his description of Piper when he sees her sitting on the bench. It's not a purely sexual attraction and for someone like Jordan, that's amazing progress. He's definitely maturing.
I don't know what the plan is right now on how to handle Ray, but Piper's obviously freaked out. And I don't really blame her. Ray may not be a physically intimidating man, but he has this freakish amount of power that I wouldn't want to cross. He knows how to handle people. Permanently. And I would imagine that his threats aren't empty. That he knows how to carry them out. And that's pretty damn scary.
So the game goes awesome and Piper's having a great time in her Staal jersey and Ray has to come along and fuck things up. Why am I not surprised? He needs to just get a grip and realize that he's already lost her. I think his problem is that he has legitimate feelings for her. Maybe he even loves her. And it's taking losing her to make him realize it. And because he can't tell her how he feels and he doesn't want to piss off the wife, he uses the threats and the nastiness as a defence mechanism.
Love how everyone just rallies around when there's a problem. Like one big happy and supportive family.
I personally am glad that he punched Ray out. He deserved it. He's been begging for it for a long time and he finally got what was coming to him.
Mario was spectacular. Love myself some Mario.
PL called the wife. That's my girl. Cause more havoc.
And Alexa really is good for something. Other than opening her legs. I'm glad she had the sense to come to Jordy's defence.
The sex in the locker room was hot. Totally hot.
Can't wait for the epilogue.