What They Don't Know Won't Hurt Them - Comments

Love it! I knew Mario would come in at the end and it was epic!

I love how mario was like Jordans guardian angel, it was a nice touch!
I can't wait for the epilogue and the engo story!!
Congrats on graduating!!!

I love this story so much. I dont want it to be over..LOL

OH MY GOT THERE IS SO MUCH SERIOUS WIN IN THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!

*insert the most epic fist pump happy dance jump around screaming celebration here*
FUCK YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was some serious case of Super Mario right there *mile wide grin* WOOOT
you don't mess with Mario's team, Shero *eyebrow wiggle*
tehehehehehe this is the best thing ever! :D

(I actually did do a first bump and scream YES at the top of my lungs when Mario appeared haha that was epic!!!)

wow.. **COMPUTER.

yay! mamma staal to the rescue?!
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those were some amazing chapters!!!
ah, im so happy that jordan and piper are well,
somewhat together now. xP
and seriously? I could have jumped into the cumputer screen and
ripped of ray shero's head myself.
Cant wait for the next update!!!!

I just want to kick old man Ray in the balls REALLY hard. What a fucktard.

I LOVE Max. He's awesome and I bet he got laid like whoa after that little speech. Which was totally made all the better by the presence of an accent. And PL and how everyone pulls together for Piper like a family. Well not Jordon obviously, he's got a different role.

I love this story, I think it's awesome still, especially the fact that Jordy is no longer cubbing (opposite role of Alexa the Cougar). Maybe old man Ray should sleep with her instead, they have a lot in common with their cradle robbing habits and all.

I just realized there hasn't been an update in so long!! I love this story and Jordan is so great...update soon please :)

Forgive me for not having the time to do a better review. But I wanted to send you something to let you know how much I loved this chapter before things got really insane around here. I really enjoyed how you used PL to reach out to Piper; shows the strength of her relationship with Jordan and how she'd do anything for him (wonder how Max feels about that lol) and how much she likes Piper. Piper obviously needs someone to be on her side ( a female that she can tell things to that she wouldn't tell men, let's face it, we can't tell our boys everything) and she needed to be shown that there are people who care!

Max asserting his authority over allowing Jordan to see Piper. Me gusta. That was hot. Love assertive and aggressive Max. And how he said that he'd 'break the fucking door down' to get to his woman if she was in a similar situation. I bet him and PL had some insane sex afterwards ;)

The Jordan and Piper smut was fabulous. As usual. I think it's exactly what she needed! To feel love and adored and worshipped!

Looking forward to more!

Oh! And I can't wait to see what he wants from his mom!

Oh dear lord of god!!! The end was hot, but sweet. I cant wait too see what happens

So glad Jordan is there to take care of Piper :) Really love it!

Once again, great update. I'm so glad Jordan came to save the day. Can't wait for the next one!

awww! I just absolutely love them together, Jordan will do anything and everything for her to be safe!!
I hope everything works out... I wonder what he called his mom for mhmmm?!!
I am sad that there is only one chapter left but this story is amazing!!
Love it <3

Did they just make love without protection? Was that deliberate? I cannot wait for the next chapter!

Loved the update...hopefully Jordan and Momma Staal can fix everything!

He needs to whisk her away and marry her and have lots of babies! lol
But really, I can't wait to see what Mama Staal thinks he should do!
I loved Jordan in this chapter! He was pretty much perfect!
Looking forward to the next even though I'm bummed it's the last! <3

i kinda love this story. can't believe there is only one chapter left. Please update it soon

dis gon be good :D anythin that involves Mama Staal has to turn out great tehehe
mr. shero... you are in trouble... big trouble... you just wait and see, maybe your days are numbered in PIT not jordans
and even if you ship him off the friggin TOR... pretty sure jordan would look awesome in the blue as well, no prob. still I'd prefer if he could continue to rock the black and vegas gold :D

great chapter! I'm loving this and I'm alrady crying cause the next one is the last chapter *starts bawling*

Guh, I hate Ray!!! But I love Jordan and how he takes care of Piper. They are so good together!! I love them. I can't wait to see what this plan of Jordan's is. Update soon!!!

I freaking love this story.