update soon please!! this is amazing!!! :) i want to know what happens next and soon!! !lol I feel as if It's been forver since the last update lots of love Erin Gracie
Okay , l reeeaaaally really really love this story . Everything about it . SO , with that being said , I would like to personally blame you for the fact that l am now dying for the next chapter . It's all you're fault . Please update soon , l might burst from anticipation ♥
I struggled reading this because some words didn't fit where you put them and a lot of times it seemed like you maybe meant to delete a word, but just forgot to. I like where you're going with this though, it's definitely an original and interesting plot. It kind of reminds me of the series Marked and Uglies mixed together. It more reminds me of Uglies, though.
I really like the banner and layout, its very pretty, and gives the text more emphasis :).
Oh this is a cool idea, she's a fairie, well she's supposed to be one, but the "transformation" hasnt hapened or something yet? I like the first chapter, it's mysterious, and it makes me want to read more, so good hook right there.
This story can go so many places! Bonus points for you having an amazing imagination to come up with this idea. I really like this, and I know you'll get lots of feeback on it. Wonderfully written.
Oh dear. I've never really had an interest in fairies, but this definitely held my attention.I love the concept of this, and I am really intrigued about Eveline and her journey. I am going to subscribe. Wonderful job!!!
okay i have fallen in love with this story i love how you portray fairies and i really want to know what kind of fairy eve is. this story is so different from others i have read so keep writing because i love it! :)
This was really different. I've never really been into fairies, but you did a wonderful job sparking my interest. The layout is beautiful, and I like your descriptions.
lots of love
Erin Gracie