Invisible Wings. - Comments

That's so cool! Granted, I haven't read any faerie stories before now, but still. It's incredibly original, and an ingenious idea. For some reason, it reminded me slightly of the Grinch? How Cindy Lou Who hasn't grown into her nose yet?

Anyways: I love the way you write. It's elegant, and yet conversational. Great job <3

I like the way you portray faeries.
They have to be one of my favorite creatures in the nocturnal/immortal world.
They're fascinating and beautiful at all costs.
The way you describe yours was fantastic, and I sort of like that she doesn't have a faerie name yet.
Although, it's sort of cliche that she is the one faerie that doesn't have a tattoo.
But then again, every story has a cliche.
The one bit I didn't like was that because he was a Twilight faerie you had to mention the Twilight books.
I didn't find that necessary. I don't really think it needed to be mentioned just because he was a Twilight faerie, if you get what I mean.

Otherwise, nice job.

Simple, elegant, wonderful. I really love everything.
Your plot seems really interesting, so I'm going to subscribe :D
I love the way you wrote this. Quite brilliant. Great job.

I'm in love with fairy/faerie stories. Yours is so unique (: Great job! <3

I for sure love this. Can't wait for more. ^_^

AWESOME. It's extremely unique. I think you should write more. I'm really interested in where this story will be going.

Hurray for awesomeness!