To Die Unknown - Comments

Hey! It's been so long. Okay I think that the last chapter was not the best ch apter of the story,but it is part of the story and I actually think that it was a key chapter though. It provided some interesting and important information, without mentioning that you introduced another importnat character (Zacky_ so I will start talking about the story in general this time because, for real, this has became like a movie inside my head. It is just amazing, that hability to describe everything and give so much detail. You have the capability to creat a whole atmosphere inside the reader's mind and believe me, describing it is not that easy, it takes a lot of time and a great vocabulary.

Great and fucking awesometastic jooob!

XOXO

Knife

Loved the update!
God, every time I go on here, your new layout gives me the creeps.
in a good way.
:)

really upset sebastian was killed. bummed. wish he had not be killed but maybe quarantined until maybe a treatment or something, bummed me out. also ready for the sisters to quit being treated like criminals. hope you update really soon

Soo yeah hai!
You must update this soon because I love this story sooo much =]

oh shit.
I'm so sorry I haven't commented, my subscriber has been acting up and I haven't been getting any notifications.
:/
OH NO! SABASTIEN!!!
Did I spell that right?
-.-;
Please update soon.

So this update was amazing. You did a really good job. I think that as a zombie story it's hard to make it good. Many try and often times butcher it. You are doing a wonderful job with it as a zombie story. It keeps me in suspense but some parts make me laugh (Even though they aren't supposed to) . Keep up the good job and I hope to read again soon... Also sexy banner you got there XD [/shamelessegoboosting]

Time for some feed back from KnifeMistress

First of all I should tell you that you are hell of a writer. The way you went through this 5 chapters was amazingly good. I love how descriptive you are, I swear I could imagine everything, It was almost as If I was there, believe me. The way you make the reader feel the story is just insane, that mood you've created and the settings are just..... fuck. When she went inside that bathtub I can tell that I also felt that relief and I imagined that feeling of taking a nice hot shower or bath after a long and hard day. The way you've defined every single character's personalities, they are unique individuals with unique attitudes and styles, not mentioning that there is a fantastic story behind all of them. Remember that great characters are the key for great stories, and you've got one here for sure!
I must tell you that your creativity has impressed me so much. This is just INSANE! I can't wait for more updates and for sure I will subscribe and comment in every new chapter from now on.
I will promote your story, you work should be recognized. You are an awesome writer. Excuse me, but this time I have no negative comments because I think this story is being written in a perfect way and It has a purpose, you are not writing nonsense stuff and seeing what you get out of it,no, you are actually developing a wonderful storyline.
Congrats for a WONDERFUL job.

XoXo

Knife
I declare myself #1 fan huj!

This is very unique and very interesting. Something that's not like most stories out there. You also are a great writer and you understand the english language as well as how to write grammatically correct. Keep up the good job! =]

Wow, your a great writer <3

Hey, great job! i like updates closer together, but if they are going to be super-duper short, don't bother.

I really liked this story :) It's interesting and different (in a good way, mind you ;)) to any other A7x story! :D Hayley is most defineately my fave, but I'm starting to love Diane too! P.S.I know that he probably isn't the main character (sp?) but what about Zacky? xD
<3LOVE IT<3

xxXxx

I myself prefer longer, less frequent, because then after a while of waiting you get a nice long massive chappie to satisfy you :) Haha ;-) But that's just me :)

Great chapter! Love the fact that their uncle's alive, so cute >.< and I'm already starting to love Diana already :) xo

Love, Lulu :) xo

I like this story, actually.
I'm probably going to put it on one of the future chapters of Mibba's Best.
Congrats? (:

I loved this next chapter, some reason was very cute to me(:

Wow this is great... for wanting to collect survivors and all that a7x is not very nice! Ugh they are jerks laughing about hitting her with the baseball bat lol i really like this very suspenseful cant wait to see where you are going with this Update please :D

Great story. I LOVE zombie stories, but unfortunately have been having trouble finding good ones. So far so good, but for a second there in chapter 2 i totally got a '28 days' later vibe. Anyway, very nice so far, and i'm hoping for more! Keep up the good work, and remember not to let the zombies get too far out of mind, they're my fav!

GAH awesome update. Hmmm...At first I thought she was gonna fall for johnny but then brian came in...
Update again soon!

Your story is amazing(:

Oh yay :) Sorry didnt comment before, I tend to only comment after then next update after I've read it :) So yah :)

I love this story! The plots awesome, zombies are awesome Avenged are awesome, it's an overall awesome piece of fiction!! I salute thee! :D

Mucho lovage, and update soon!

x Lulu x

What you have here, is one really incredible storyline. You did a great job of bringing the situation to life. The emotions expressed in this story, from fear to anxiousness, only make the story more relatable to the reader. Hayley is a strong character, and I like that alot. She (for the most part) always has her back covered. Her Victoria and Sebastian are a close knit group, even though she gets annoyed by him. I'm hoping that they all fit into this "community".