Fat Girl - Comments

i am so glad you updated this. i was going through my subscriptions yesterday and i was all like, "I WANNA READ MORE OF FAT GIRL." :)
yes, you need more happy chapters. sad chapters make me sad. (wonder why. lmao.)
great update! :)

I think you should write a chapter on the awkwardness of gym class. Personally I feel VERY AWKWARD like I don't want to seem slower than the others and how my face gets red and I can't cool down in time for my next class and changing in the locker rooms. :P

Love this story to bits! :)

THIS STORY IS PURE GENIUS AND IT SUCKS THAT I REMEMBERED IT NOW. (Silly me, I remember finding it at chapter 3. xD)

I'LL BE BACK WITH A REAL COMMENT BUT IT'S 5AM AND I MUST BOUNCE.

ps: I feel fat lol

Wow I havn't been on for a while... Anyways, I really like the latest chapter because it shows that even though we have flaws, there's nothing better then to laugh at them. That's what I usually do. Great chapter, can't wait for the next :)

This story is a really unique story and i can't wait to see where it goes!

Aww, I hope Monica's crush on James goes well. Ahh, great update!

Ha...jokes bro. Jokes.
Google chrome thinks bro is spelled wrong. I don't think so!!
ANYWAYS!
Hi.
I was watching this show and someone said, "Come help! She can't get her boobs in the hamburgers!"
The fuck?
Mkay bye!

aww this chapter is quite cute <3 a little sad but cute, i guess it has its moments :P

also,

nice joke at the end, teeheehee,

Whale you be my valentine?

XD

I think that it's nice she's getting some sort of attention from James, and maybe she'll get a little more confident eventually. And I can defiantly relate to her, when a boy pays attention to me it makes me feel somewhat weightless ahha. <3(:

This was a good chapter! Its good that she's getting attention from James, maybe she'll get more confidence. :) I wouldn't completely trust Stella myself...but, hey, you never know.

Great update!!! <3

I love the story. I love the way you write. I love how I can really get into Monica's head. I love it. Stella seems really cool and Hilary seems kinda uptight. but anyway. I love the story. I have a feeling that somehow Stella is gonna betray her. I mean, she's friends with Bianca who is a complete and utter bitch. I hate Bianca. haha. but yeah. Keep up the good work :) Can't wait for the next update :D

Aww, I see there's a bit of a spark with this boy. Boys who purposely try to get a girl to laugh most definitely like them. I love when a boy pays a bit more attention to me, I agree, it really does tend to make you feel weightless. I love this, the way it's progressing and the way you write it is just amazing.

“Oh my god, seriously, did we even learn this?” Story of my life

Anyways, YAY UPDATE!!!

It was both happy and sad :/ It's sad the Monica is questioning being friends with Hilary (though I can see why) and I hope they remain friends 'cuz Hilary's stuck with her all this time.

I like James more and more with every chapter though. It's easy to see why Monica likes him, and he seems like a nice guy :) And DUUUDE I want to hear more about Stella's mom xDDD I feel like there could be some hilarious stories there ;)

Ma'am, I take my hat off to you. You're astounding yourself

Ah, I'm so glad you updated this. Because this is honestly one of my favorite stories, and that kind of comes with the territory of being one of my favorite writers. I love the repetitions you do in here it just fits so well and makes the story have that much more feel and meaning to it. I feel so bad for Monica and I really hope that by the end of this story she can be content with herself. :/

Shorts and her a friends, the best of friends, because that’s who Stella is.

Should it be Shorts and her are friends

Brilliance just as before! I seriously was beginning to wonder where you went! :) Glad you updated! I loved. <3

You finally updated and it was a great update.

Aw Monica. :(
I hope things really look up for her, maybe she'll hang out with Stella.

Anyway I really hope you continue with this story, I really love it.

Yesssssssssss! You updated! I was so happy because I literally looked at this story the other night and was sad that it hadn't been updated! But now it is and everything is great again! xD But seriously, that was a good chapter. I hope Monica does something over the summer instead of just feeling down. Maybe she'll hang out with Stella? Oh, I dunno! xD

Guess who's happy?
This girl...

:D

Her patience is wearing thin unlike her thighs and she’s exhausted with her dreams dancing just before her fingertips.
I really liked that line, it just appealed to me, ahha. I think you did a great job on the chapter and expressing how Monica's view on summer. (: