Fat Girl - Comments

OMG I <3 THIS!

Okay, this is going to sound kind of weird, but lately I've been looking for a story to read about fat people. I get these story cravings sometimes and this time around it was this haha. So I'm so happy that I found your story! And it's also incredibly well written and lovely and tragic and realistic and AWESOME! Can't wait for the next update! :D

I absolutely adore this. It's intense rawness is just so enthralling. us big girls need loving too and I love how you just rawly point out how society sees her, I guess.

Ugh, way to get my feelings towards summer out in the open. I swear I told you all of that in confidence :p

Haha just kidding. I thought you did this chapter very well, showing all of the true traits of a girl trying to lose weight. I like that you made her notice the smallest things that skinny people might not notice, like the size of a thigh. I thought I was the only one who noticed a thigh. I immediately look to see for a thigh gap even though I don't have one. I can't wait for you to continue this (:

Blah. I used to think like that. I got over it.

YAY YOU'RE BACK.
That was amazing. I love this story.
It's powerful and unique and beautiful.
That update was absolutely splendid. :)

amazing story. I absolutely love it. I was in the mood for something unique and different and this was definately it. You did an incredible job at capturing the story of an over weight girl and the struggles she faces every day. Im definately subscribing and I hope the end has a pleasant content feeling. In other words I hope the main character finds peace with herself

I love this story, it actually inspires me :D I'd love to be a beta for you as well.

By the by, last time I checked, (tomorrow i weigh myself) since the last time i weighed myself I had lost 8 pounds!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ah to be healthy, happy and comfy in short-shorts and not scorching in knee length shorts and cow boy legs...

Lol :P

Yay for an update! I was skimming the stories section looking for improper titles to report (because I'm a snarky bitch like that xD) and I flailed when I saw this on the first page. YAY!

Anyways...

Duuude I totally know how Monica feels. I hate short shorts with a passion xD I'm all for the knee-length ones myself... >>

Ah, but it's amazing as usual. That second to last line about her brother made me really sad D:

And I could beta for you, it's not a problem. I'm signed up as on in the beta forum, so doing my job would be good xD

.......Why haven't you updated?! I've been gone and the first thing I do is click this story so I could read updates. And I find there is...nothing. Nothing? NOTHING?!!!!!!!
WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!?
Do you enjoy knowing I wanted to read this so you didn't update to punish me for leaving you?
Ok...i see how it is.
O.e

I don't know how you do it, Gabby. @.@ It's like, what, fifteen chapters, and you've practically got 20 comments for each one. It's unreal chis's. :P
Well I'll be that person that screams at you to update this story. :P
Nah joking.
But seriously, last three or so updates, fabulus as always. :D Really sad in a way, but nice. Nice nice.
Why does this story always make me hungry? o.o
Aherm anyways. Great job, keep updating!

Awwwww! I loooooovvveee this story!! U r so freakin awesome! I hope everything goes well for her. I can really relate to this story. I am struggling with my weight but I'm on the right track with exercise and eating right and whatnot. Sometimes I feel the same way this girl feels. I like to think I'm a little more confident tho. Well keep on updating! This is a super duper wonderful story :) thanks for being an awesometastic writer! Yes I do believe that I have made up a word hehehehe. Keep up the awesometasticness!

-Bailey W

Hi! I like this story a lot, can you please update?

Woah! There was three chapters I had to get to and they were simply amazing. I like that Monica is in better mood and that she's trying to help herself. Anyway I can't wait for more, it's truly a great story. :)

Another great chapter as usual. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Don't know why, but this chapter is getting me pumped for the next one XD

dear god.
how have I only just found this story?!
it's breathtaking. <3

So I've finally read this story and holy poop I love it. I love it because it's about a fat girl and about how much it sucks to be overweight and be picked on because of it. I love that's she's not secure with herself and just the feelings are so real. It's a wonderful piece and I'm glad I finally sat down and read it all. I did catch several errors while reading through it but nothing a simple read through or edit can't fix. :) lovely job woman.

I love this.
It's inspiring and great! (:

I love it. <3
It's amazing. And so true.

call me dr sex on the internet then

Good, I've been working on that degree for a while now

Anyways, I liked the approch to this chapter. It was all very implicit and dreamy. My mind kind of floated along with Monica's. It was a lovely way to make this chapter different and still keep to the ideas of the story. Well done :]