Jasey Rae - Comments

Hey, I absolutely love this!
I just read the first chapter and it's really great!
I'm sorry, but I felt the need to point out, Kobe Bryant never played for Chicago or Miami, that's Dwayne Wade. Kobe's played with the Lakers since 1996.
You can hate me and totally not care about what I'm saying, but I just thought I'd point that out.
You're an excellent writer, though!(:

This was great. I absolutely loved it, it was really original and I couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. :) Too bad it's already done....lol. :)

love the ending :D

PUT UP THE SEQUEL
This story is good(:

is it bad that I actually cried while reading this?

Put up the sequel right now, you wanker. Just kidding, you're too epic to be a wanker. My sister's BFFL is a wanker.

Anywhore, I can't believe this story's over. It was spectacular all the way through. I just can't believe Alex wasn't there to say goodbye. Then again, if this is anything like the song, he'll certainly have his comeback soon. Ahh, but it's so sad. I think there had to be some logical reason why Alex told her all of that shit, though. Y'know, I bet it was Voldemort. Yep, Voldemort tapped into our lovely hunk of man and told him to break Jasey Rae's heart. Either that, or he really was using her for sex, Sven if he did love her. Maybe the love faded, he got her virginity, and that was that. Regardless, I found it was ultra spectacular. You should be proud of yourself.

Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! I've loved every chapter of this story and have grown quite fond of your characters. I hope you get over your fever soon and you reach 90 comments. Again, I must reiterate: Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

i LOVED THIS STORY!! CANT WAIT FOR THE SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

i feel like a baby, i cried. D; it was so sad!

I cried a little when she left, so sad. I still wanna kill Alex :( And please post the sequel soon! I can't wait!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

i loved this story so much i read it all in literally a day :D
You're such a talented a writter and i can't wait to read more of your stuff :)
Are you going to do a sequal? like 6 years on in 2011 (now)? Or are you starting something new? :)

love the ending :D

I love how everyone above hates Alex even though I don't. Confusing right? Anyways, I feel like someone blackmailed Alex to say what he said or he just said what he said so when Jasey leaves, it'll hurt less. I want to believe Alex is the victim even though I don't really think he is. For once, when has Alex ever been a victim? Think about it. c:

I have a feeling that the kisses with Jack weren't the thing that cause Alex to be a (For a lack of a better term) asswipe. With his personality, he'll probably just be mad or something.

I don't think that Alex means what he said because after all they've been through... Really? I seriously doubt anyone believes what he said. He was mad Jasey told him her true identity. Any person who was just playing with a girl would've been ecstatic but Alex was angry that Jasey didn't trust him enough to tell him. I just don't believe Jasey knows the full story.

Now onto Jack. Well what can I say? He's a sweetheart. I don't think that he'll ever hurt Jasey purposely. He was awesome through the whole story. He helped Jasey along the whole way. He was the first who found out her secret, he let her stay at his house when she was kicked out and he supported her against his best friend. If that isn't loyalty, I don't know what is. Jack better not screw up like Alex did.

Jasey, Jasey, Jasey. Kissing Jack behind Alex's black is a big no-no but hey, I can see your reason. Because of that, I'm not going to go on a rant for no reason just to end up on the spot I am on now. That would be pointless. Instead, I'm going to sympathize. So here it goes: Jasey! My gosh, I can't believe Alex is such a bastard. Even if I don't believe he was playing you, you don't deserve the pain you possess right now. You should move on and I bet Jack will help you along the way. ;D

To sum it up, Alex isn't giving the full story, Jack is just plain awesome, and Jasey owes me a dollar --- No, the last one isn't true. Let's rewind: and Jasey well, she's a baseball star, and her heart just got broken, she amazing and realistic as a character. Though, she gives up too easily ...But then again I think anyone would've done what she did in her position. (Unlike her though, I would have gladly yelled some choice words and slapped him :X). That's about it.

Please Update Soon!(:

~Lilith Crysyla <3

alex was a major douchebag!
:(

I hate Alex so much right now. He just opened the door for Jack to have a real shot. I hope that this doesn't affect Jasey's game when she gets back. I ready for your last chapter and the sequel! Anyways, this story isn't like all the other ones I've read, it's freaking awesome.

Someone better stop me, cause I'm gonna kill Gaskarth! That fucking ...... Aaah I just don't have words for it! He's dead!
Sorry, I'm so pissed right now. Thank god she has Jack. <3 Can't wait for the last chapter <3

love the update :D

Grrr... I want to punch Alex now!!!

:( alex is such a jerk

poor jasey :/ looking forward for the next update :)