Holy shit, Marley! This chapter was good. Like, insanely good. I loved it. The surprise, well, it surprised me, that's for sure. I'm glad Sam didn't take it personally—it's a nice little way for things to work out. Hayley and Alex are together, but Jasey's in the shadows...for right now. -sniffs- I smell trouble. -sniffs again- Actually, I smell steak. But still. Trouble's a-brewin' in this pot of wild amazingness. For the record, someone ought to slap her daddy, cuz he's a jerk. A real big fat jerk. I'm really glad you updated. I was just thinking about this story this morning, so it's an interesting coincidence.
i just started reading this story last night and i've finished it and.. ITS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! i love how it can make me laugh, cry and be happy all at the same time!
That is one awesome B-day. She got tickets to see Blink :D (I saw them on my 18th B-day along with ATL and some other bands on a festival :D) and a puppy!!! <3 Me=Jealous, very jealous....Cute name btw. GOD, her dad is a jerk!! The ending was really sad. Oh, and I like that you didn't put part 3 of the gift in this chapter, Update soon please <3
MARLEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY! THIS CHAPTER IS AMAZING. SHUT UP AND GET TO WRITING, YOU CRITIC! Haha<333 Much love(:
AWEE. HER MOM ISN'T A TOTAL HEARTLESS BITCH! Okay, screw Alex, I love him and all, but personally, I want to steal Sam away from Hayley/Jasey/Yo-Mama. Just kidding about the last one though. But fo' sheriousleh, he's amazing. Wait, on second thought, Jack is single. I want to marry him now (as if I didn't before). HER DAD IS A DOUCHE BAG DRAMALLAMAMAMARAMA. Can I shoot him? -points gun- I got weaponry.
Haha I love the part where she just leave Jack at the side of the road. LMFAO! Jack and Alex fighting? Sorry Jack but I don't think you're gonna win that one. So her father finally dicides to show up? That's gonna be interesting. Update soon please <3
Oh shit. Dramadramadrama. Dramallama. First, Alex is being a douchebag and talking about her. Then her daddy decides he suddenly wants to be a part of her life. Whattaloadofshit. Urgghhhh. Update soon, I'm addicted to this story.
I really can't believe her mother. You can't just judge a person because of ONE thing that they like to do. It saddens me that there are people like that who exist in the real world.
I can't believe Jasey! She had to do that to Jack.. but it was sooooo.. I don't even have words for it. She made Jack cry! =( Anyway, I like Jack in this story. I currently don't like Alex. But what else is new? xD
Aww thanks. This story is just so amazing I HAVE to comment :D OMG! Jack is so adorable in this chapter! Scratch that, he's aways so adorable! I can't believe Alex got together with that whore! So sad, so sad.... She really loves him. I really hope he doesn't hate her. So happy she finally had the guts to stand up to her mom. She should go live with on of the guys or something. Update soon please <3
You have such an underwhelming amount of comments.
I wish I would've commented a little more. But I really love this story. It's so clever and ingenious, well...I just don't know what to say. The passion you put in your writing is amazing. I love your updates, and the story seems to get better and better. You might want to proofread a tad, you have a few errors here and there, but other than that, they're completely fine.
UPDATE MORE OFTEN. I will whore this out on my profile.
Love the new layout, it's really pretty. Alex was gonna ask her out!! Way to fuck up, Jasey :P The end was funny, I love how she just ran out. Update soon please <3