Jasey Rae - Comments

Amazing update! After this chapter, I love Jasey's character so much more, she's like a real person. Maybe Alex found out about the original beach kiss with Jack and doesn't know how to deal with it. Also, I'm terribly sorry for your loss. Still, congrats on your 5th rank in athletics. I hope things in your daily life pick up and the amount of homework goes down. Can't wait for your next update.

I agree with f-lies.

WTF Alex!? Did he hit his head or something. What the hell is wrong with that boy. Oh, Jack, he shouldn't have kissed Jasey. Update soon please <3

love the update :D

Wow!! This was AMAZING!! I started reading, and I absolutely could not put it down. I wine up at four this morning to continue reading where I stopped late last night :))) it was super amazing!!!!!!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter!!! <3 <3 <3

i absolutely loveee this couple!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!<3
i canttt wait for the next update :D

Awwwwhhhh! Thanks for the shout-out(:

Oooooohhhhhhhh.
-wipes invisible sweat off of brow-
Damn. They were gettin' down to it, especially if she had a couple bruises. That's so...romantic in a sexy kind of way. The fact that she did this not too long after telling off that asshole that helped create her was even better---I feel like that could set something else up. Like, if she and Alex got into a huge fight or something, she could definitely use that as an excuse to try to hurt him. Although I doubt it'll happen, it's an interesting thought. Nevertheless, I quite enjoyed the chapter. A lot, actually.

Update soon(3

love the update :D

i lovedd this update!!1

You're story is so original and this chapter was so super cute. It makes me long for Christmas 2011 already. You should totally go for a sequel, I don't want to see the story end yet. As for the hint, I'm dreading Jasey having to leave Alex and the boys! Still, I can't wait for the next update. =D

I have a bad feeling about this after reading that author's note. Update soon please <3

That chapter was delightful! All the cheer and whatnot. The dare was spectacular---I didn't know Alex had it in 'em. Figured that he was gonna lose and just collapse on top of her, ravage her, and never get back up. Yeah, okay, back to the story. The mistletoe thing was hilariously romantic, if that makes any sense, and overall, I'm extremely pleased with it. Beyond extremely, in fact. It was cute and lovely with the perfect amount of humor in it.

HOLY FUCKITS, THE DRAMA IS COMING!
Nice hint(: But damnnn, I predict something's gonna happen. She's totally going to accidentally end up kissing Jack or something like that, then Alex is going to find out (not sure whether he might see or not) and then pretty much dump her and tell her to get her ass back to Chicago as soon as humanly possible, then feel guilty as fuck about it because he fought fire with fire, and that's totally not going to work. Not. At. All. Which would lead into the sequel.

I doubt I'm right, but whatever, it's just a prediction. Splendid job with the chapter, really. Update soon[x

loving this<3 just in the summary you said that hayley johnson was without a wig

love the update :D

I KNEW THEY WERE GOING TO KISS!
IT WAS ONLY A MATTER OF TIME!

Holy shit, if this is anything like the song...oh shit, oh shit, the drama's gonna pile up like dog shit in a circus man's backyard. Oh my fuckers, that's not good. So yeah, I think it's more up to you, but it sounded like you were planning a sequel before you asked the question. If you were, then I'd say A. If not, then B. Whichever is more convenient with you.

Alright, so this chapter was amazing. The chain thing is epic, Jack should give it to me for my birthday next month, he just should, even if it has another girl's name on it, haha, just kidding(:
But seriously, it makes me wonder about her friendship with him---did she get anything like that for Alex, her boyfriend? I can't remember. And with Jack and Jasey, it wasn't clear whether he felt something she didn't, so I'm assuming he didn't? Ehhh, poor Jack, he needs a lady, as do the rest of the boys.

Update soon(:

A.

I love the whole bet thing. I seriously have no idea who's gonna win. YES PLEASE DO A SEQUEL!!!!! <3

love the update :D
ahh go Jasey, Alex is gonna loose.

PLEASE DO A SEQUEL PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

A!
i soooo want a sequel! this is an amazing story! <3