Twenty-One and Invincible - Comments, page 4

AllTimePensFan (100)

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awww that wasn't nice, you totally shouldn't have ended it there...

well I'm going to check out ur Sidney one-shot now, and I can't wait for ur Tanger one XD Keep up the great work on this story, lovin it

November 10th, 2010 at 04:40am

katieees. (100)

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im hooked! cant wait until the next chapter! :)

November 10th, 2010 at 03:36am

gummibears (100)

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uhmm yeah update please....this is soo good!

November 10th, 2010 at 03:29am

nik-x (150)

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I loved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it.
More soon, please?

November 10th, 2010 at 01:13am

toewsfan1 (100)

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please update soon!!
or like often lol

November 9th, 2010 at 10:12pm

Guns and Alex (100)

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ooh la la!
Roar

November 9th, 2010 at 10:11am

SarrSarr (100)

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I read the part of your authors note where you were like "I'm going to keep you on your toes" and I was like:
Toes....toe-ez---toews <333333
Hahha just thought I should put that out there.

November 9th, 2010 at 04:45am

Ultraviolet Light (100)

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so are they together now? :D
ohhhh theyre taking it somewhere else ;)

November 9th, 2010 at 04:43am

loganmariee (100)

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wow, they went all the way!!

November 9th, 2010 at 03:44am

headintheclouds (100)

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ooooh, i loved it!!!
more soon please?

November 9th, 2010 at 02:46am

Peace.Love.Hockey. (100)

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Okay! so excited they're together now!

November 9th, 2010 at 02:36am

toewsfan1 (100)

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update!!!!!!!!1

November 9th, 2010 at 02:02am

jerseyloveee (100)

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YES! I was almost for a second afraid she might deny him. but hooray! P.Kane's so sweet.

November 9th, 2010 at 01:26am

kendra-rae (100)

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AHHH!! why end it there wants to know what happens !!! I guess will just have to wait but seriously i cannot wait for the next update ... so pumped:D

November 9th, 2010 at 01:25am

wickedsakura (105)

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Love this! I've been dying to read a Patrick Kane story, and I've found yours, which is wonderful!
Please update soon!
<33

November 9th, 2010 at 01:09am

Ultraviolet Light (100)

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hahaha grandma is so right!!!
the mistletoe part was adorable!!
gah they kissed! im so happy!!

November 8th, 2010 at 04:39am

nik-x (150)

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YAY! Finally, Pat made his move!
It was sweet.
And the end part with her grandma was cute.
More soon, please!

November 8th, 2010 at 02:15am

penschick8771 (100)

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aww I loved the updates : )
i absolutely love this story
I think the way he kissed her with the mistletoe over their heads was so cute : )
please update soon : )

November 8th, 2010 at 01:11am

toewsfan1 (100)

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please update!!!

and more of pat andcarmen too!

November 8th, 2010 at 01:03am

NMT82 (100)

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Great story. Glad they finally kissed.

November 8th, 2010 at 12:25am