Twenty-One and Invincible - Comments

Oh, how I am enjoying the way this story is going XD. I wasn't expecting these last few chapters to begin with, so I really do hope things are alright eventually. Can't wait for the next chapter!

awwww... i do hope they work out!

oooooo......its getting intense!!

oh geez, I meant to type 'realistic than', I dont know how that happened

hi! I really like this story! I like how she doesn't just fall in love with him right away, it's more realisticthnqn other stories. I really reallly like it :)

OH MY GOD! How could you do that? Seriously? SERIOUSLY?!

Update soon and please let Grandpa be alright!

Oh No! Update soon please

Oooooh my God. This is really a good story so far. Like-- to die for. (: Even though the last chapter was pretty sad. I almost started crying. >>;;;
But what else is funny, I went to a hockey game on Saturday. And a woman in front of me was honestly just sitting there, all dressed up just like Gabie. I was like, "Realllly?" My mind instantly shot to this story. Hahaha.

OMG! I just read the whole story and I love it! I was completly into it when I realizes I had reached the last chapter :(. I love the story and I hope you'll be able to update soon!.

I love this story!! Can't wait to see what happens! update soon pleaseee

please update soon! i love this story!

OMG! Wow I hope her Grandpa and her is ok.

Omg!! What's gonna happen to her grandpa?? Please don't let anything to him.
I can't wait for more. I love this story

I love this story!<3
Please update soon!

LOVED IT!!! :D Update soon!<3

oh my I hope her grandpa is okay and Kaner is too made she dip set on him in the morning. Hopefully he'll go to the hospital to see her. Great update and can't wait for more

omg! i can't believe this happened! :(
i hope things turn out to be alright.
great work!!

you're a jerk !!!

:(

kidding <3

but seriously! aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

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whats gonna happen!?!?

D:
omg poor grandpa!! i hope hes okay!!

totally wasnt expecting that!!! Update soon I wanna know how everything turns out!