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this needs to be updated... cough cough. :p

YAY, YOU UPDATED! I'm a little confused though because for some reason a lot of this story sounds familiar, like I already read this chapter a while ago...

It's great! <3

OH MY DEAR GOD.
YOU HAVE UPDATED.
My willy is so happy c;

I'm honestly looking really forward to the Summit performance. And I love how Ava acts around Taylor, it's so cute. c:

I squeaked when I read about Rob. Oh gawd, what that man does to me...
Hehe oh, how I can't WAIT for Issues.
You killed me, you know. </3
Another lovely update, Lui.
Love you c:

Lol 'Tempting'
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So, I love this story. :)
I really do.
I want you to update as soon as you can. I miss this story.
:)

Missed you, darling<3
Hope you feel so much better :)

Its fine. Take your time.
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FINALLY I AM HERE TO READ.
AND OMFG.
LMFAOOOOOOO.

Bahahahahahaahahaa, I seriously think I died and came back to life after reading the last two chapters, Lui.
You really are something, :D

Like I've said plenty of times, this is absolutely great and I am dying for an update soon(;

I love youuu :D

Amazing story! I want a happy ending if you were asking for that. I like James, but I think she should just break up with him and get it over with. Hope you update soon!

Suuuuuper fed historie - rent faktisk en TL story der giver mening og har et godt flow, og ikke bare er ren omg-han-er-lækker-ævl... Håber snart der kommer en update! ;)

Really I just want her to be true to her self. If her heart is breaking by lying to James, then she shouldn't be doing it in the first place. And later on it would just hurt James as well.
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BUT HE IS SO SWEET....
BUT THEN AGAIN TAYLOR IS ONE HOT MOTHER FUCKING PIECE OF ASS.

ahahahahahahaha.
Lol.
Dude, this was great, AS ALWAYS.
<3

I love James, and his relationship with Ava is so sweet and loving. And to wish for their relationship to fall apart is extremely rude but I just really want Ava with Taylor already!

Okay. Let me get down to it: James versus Taylor. Ackk! It's usually so easy to fix a love triangle because one guy is like a total douche. But James is soo nice, I don't want to hurt him. Plus, Ava owes it to him to try. They have been dating for so long, and he gave up dance for her. He loves her so much, and she is supposed to feel the same way. Taylor, on the other hand, is TAYLOR LAUTNER. Need I say more? And he's not just playing with her. He genuinely likes her. My solution? Ava ends up with Taylor. BUT JAMES GETS A HAPPY ENDING TOO. He should fall for someone else(:
Great chapter, though, I really loved it. It was really serious, and I'm glad you put it in the story. I see why it's necessary, but I'm sort of upset with the decision Ava made. Update soon!
Lots of love,
Niki(:

i love this story and think you should totally keep it up. but whats going to happen when she gets home? What about james? Is she going to finally break up with him? What happens next?!!

Thanks for the tips! I can't wait for your next update(:
And LOL, I'm a daydreamer too. Even when I'm reading someone else's story, I'll get up, back away from the computer, and a different scene would take place in my head. Glad to know I'm going in the right direction, though, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I personally love Ava's character (and her name, it's sooo unique and beautiful. I'm very picky with character names). Her personality inspires me to create tougher, better female leads, because the one thing that annoys me is damsels-in-dstress. Ava is strong, and she has passion. Great job(:

Wow, I really love this story and glad I found it. I wish I found it earlier. It's simply amazing. The details are shocking! You write amazing! Each chapter has made me laugh and I can't wait to see the next update. The personalities of the characters are brilliant and I love 'em. I love it! [:

I think both acts of the parties was accurate.
:)
Good job.
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At first...
i seriously thought they did shit.
I was like. I FUCKING MISSED THIS COCK SUCKING BITCH GET DIRTY.
LOLJK.
hahahaha, oh my gosh, Lui.
Keep it coming. I adore this story. xD

Me loves you.
and yes, I'm doped up on my pain meds from the ER, leave me alone. <3

Gonna make a few of my dumb comments lol.
NO ONE CAN GULP DOWN JACK DANIELS NAKED.
Not me.
oh my god, that shit is so strong. D: