Happy Belated Birthday! I hope it was a good one. So... I'm kinda sorta craving another chapter. If you could post again soon that would be fantastic. Oh! And I loved it, by the way. -Lindsey
You're amazing! I love the little touches of humour you add in between the heavy drama. I kinda find it sad that Ava has to choose between Taylor and James. They sound so god damn perfect. It's just like chocolate and candy. Either way they're sweet and comforting. Another great chapter! Happy belated birthday!
Hehe, I already told you happy birthday... ON your birthday. xD
Me loves you, Lui. <3 I loved their date, though, it was cute when his heart sank when she told him about her boyfriend. But I can tell that James and her aren't going to be together for much longer.
again, as per usual: AMAZING. i have to say, and i don't know if i've mentioned it before, that even though this is a taylor story, you do a really fantastic job of making us (or at lease ME) fall in love with James too. I mean usually with that kind of thing i just get really frustrated and want them to get gone already, but there's something about him that i really like, almost to the point where i want him to win. (almost being the key word). written beautifully. executed beautifully. you're the best :)
yayyyy update for me! :) hahah i think my favorite part was her looking for the phone. i totally know how frustrating it is to hear it keep going off in public but you can't freaking find it. i also love how each of the girls are so different and unique, yet they all get along together so well and seem to balance each other out. as always, loveeee <3 i'll be waiting :)
LMFAO, I love Ashley - or me, whatever. I can honestly say, I am the exact same way, haha. :D
I am going to kill some chickens if you don't update soon. But if you don't like chickens, then tell me what you like, and I'll threaten to kill it, that way you can update faster. MUWAHAHAH.
love love LOVE. can you tell i love this story? the whole dynamic and her reluctance to flirt, but not being able to help it. oh, how it is to be in a relationship and have raging crushes... difficult, that's how it is and you explain it PERFECTLY. loved the whole part with her tattoo, also. it's just one more aspect that adds to the awesomeness that is Ava's character. GAH, but really, can't get enough of this. i realllly hope you update soon :)
Lui, this chapter was by far amazing. I AM SO GLAD, that Harold was mentioned! :D
This was really cute, I love how she has the tattoo and I could totally picture what it looked like. Pretty epic. (: and thank you for the dedication thingy ma-bob, it means a lot. I loves you toooo, Lui. <3
I just started reading this story today so I'm really sorry for the lack of comments. BUT.... I think this story is turning out beautifully. I'm literally craving the next chapter. -Lindsey
I'm really starting to like this story! You're writing is simple, yet descriptive. (I don't know I that makes anything but I really like it) Loving how slow and real this is. It's no Hollywood romantic "never in a million years is this happening" chick flick. It makes it that much more relatable. Hope you update this soon!
Great job!
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