False Pretense - Comments

great update
<3 Michele

Awww that was cute! Jai is so funny xD

naw zacky mom is awesome :}

I fucking love this story. I just read the whole thing, I hope Kimber isn't one of those bitchy stepmoms

Oh. He really shouldn't have brought her.
This is good.

Parents can be dumb sometimes ha... Update soon! Please! :)

love it!
her dad is such an ass, why
would he do that to her?
gahhhhhh
update soon!

I can't wait for the next one

:O
I feel bad for Cas.
I loved the chapter.
Please update soon.

matt dry humping zacky, thats hot, lmao my birthday is tomorrow, 10/3, -random- lolz

Damn . . . poor girl =[
Is Kimber the mistress?
update soon please
<3 Michele

GAH! What a doucher?!?
That man needs to get shot in his nads. xp

Dear Bess Frann...last night was awesome and I'm still not caught up on the sleep I missed from doing that....I'm sorry I kicked you and then laughed when I said I was sorry in my sleep...This story is AH-MAZING...and now that I have read it I can sleep and have wonderful dreaamms....=))
"sorry heheahah" LOOVEE YOU BESS FRAANN
((oh and i bet i could you know what with the dahli llama if i wanted to too ;) ))

I just got caught up and I loved loved everything

Woot! Woot! Zacky and Jadey have become official folks... Yay!!!!!!! Update when you can XD

pretty good :) Can't wait for the next one

This story is absolutley amazing. I love it so far. Update soon please! :)

=/ I'm sorry that you are loosing subscribers
but this chapter was amazing!!! Finally they are together
update soon please
<3 Michele

Lolage to the lack of info being put through to everyone. Aren't Zacky and Cas really cute? Slightly freaked by Brian's assumption they're Mummy and Daddy - ing :-/ freaky boy!!
More soon? Please?

I really liked the chapter.
Please update soon.