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  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    The truth comes out!
    Well part of it.
    So what the HELL does Swift the Bitch want with Addison?????????
    UPDATE LIKE NOW PLEASE!! :)
    June 20th, 2011 at 05:41am
  • troubled thoughts;

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    Yay! You updated! :D
    Whoa you just told us Kevin and Dani's secret xD
    Well, I don't really have anything to say, but lemme say this.. I love the update and the story. You make such a very good story and I really get addicted of this story.
    Can't wait for the next update! :D
    June 4th, 2011 at 04:34pm
  • fiction tears;

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    Wow, just wow.
    I always knew that Finn's Addison's brother xD, well, really deep inside.
    Lol at Kevin and Dani's secret, I love the devotion Addison has for Mrs.Jonas, and Joe of course, she is really lucky!
    Thanks for the shout-outs you put me into, I always remember them xD. See No More when I say "In The Rose Garden" is the best story concerning Joseph, I always wanted to say that xD
    June 4th, 2011 at 12:53pm
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    Awesome update!
    So I take we find out that they're twins in the next chapter...?
    What was that about Kevin && Danni?
    Were you referring to the house thing?
    UPDATE SUPER SOON PLEASE!! :)
    June 4th, 2011 at 06:15am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! Hm... so that's why Addison has made Joe wait: because of him. I can understand why she feels that way; I'd feel the same if I were in her position. With, like, Joe's purity ring promise and for his mom. It's her way of showing that she respects both. :)
    Um... lol. You told Dani and Kevin's secret. :P Hm... wait... are they married in this story? Or haven't you gotten to that part yet? Can't remember what you said their status was in this. lol. But relating to real life, I'm pretty sure their secret is out of the bag. :P
    Aw, and so Joe finally confronted Addison about how he's leaving. That's going to be a bit heartbreaking; they're going to miss each other like crazy! :( But hopefully the two weeks will just fly by for them.
    And hm... Addison's dad probably signed Finn's birth certificate! That's my guess as to why Finn's showing it to her. Oh, and her mom probably did too, of course. :P But again, that's just a guess. ;)
    Overall, great update! Can't wait for more! :D
    P.S.- Thanks for all of the shout-outs you've been giving at the end of the chapters. I always forget to thank you for them, and I believe you said it's the least you can do, but still. I, as I'm sure the other commentors do as well, appreciate it. :)
    June 4th, 2011 at 03:53am
  • fiction tears;

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    That was awesome.
    Now, I finally know that Finn is the brother of Addison!
    When I heard Joe say, " Taylor probably wrote a song about you", Better Than Revenge popped into my mind :P
    I lol'ed at the end, but I loved how devoted Addison is to make Joe keep his promise.
    Like always, can't wait for more!
    May 17th, 2011 at 03:06pm
  • Nanook

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    Loved the updates! Whoa... so Finn is her brother, then, huh? Well, you revealed that in the flashback. :P But now I'm wondering again about who her father is... and whether you'll actually tell us or not. :o
    Aw, and yeah... I did catch those Nick moments again... :o So... I'm thinking they are happening. Seeing as there was that moment in the room, unitalisized, and it's kind of giving me a better idea. lol. But I still have no idea what to think exactly.
    Um... oh, and her mother didn't follow through with her promise. :/ I was actually believing that she would there for a moment, seeing as she was at least somewhat nice to Addison when she visited. Not exactly nice, but you know... at least she didn't call her names or shout at her or anything.
    Aha, and I thought it was funny when both Addison and Lily thought of Joe as gay when he said that term... what was it again? 'Delightfully pleasing', I believe. lol. But you have to admit they did have a point. What guy really does say that? :P
    lol. And kind of an awkward ending to the end of the last update. :o Wasn't expecting Joe to ask that, that's for sure. I wonder how Addison will respond? O.o lol.
    Overall, great job with both updates! :) Can't wait for more! :D
    Aw, and I didn't make being the 100th commenter. Aw... oh well. :P
    May 16th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • yarrow.

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    OHMIGOODNESS what's she going to say?!?!? are they going to do it?!?! update soon por favor!
    May 15th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • troubled thoughts;

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    Cliffhanger!! Gosh!! You should update it soon! I really wanna know what Addison will say to Joe! :D
    May 14th, 2011 at 12:05pm
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    Okay so first comment since October! Wow I feel like a terrible person! :) So I am hoping a nice long comment will make up for it! I am not quite to chapter 29 because my eyes hurt and I need sleep, but we will see how this goes.

    So Garbo I love and am so glad he is in this story well the chapters I have read which is up to 21. I don't know if you have see him recently but he has long hair. I am not a big fan, maybe he has cut it since then Let hope!

    "You may have him but I always get the last word" sneaky! I see what you are doing there lol! I love that song by the way! She's better known for the things that she does on a mattress! Oh Taylor Swift!

    When you mentioned Demi I wasn't sure if she was going to be brought up later. I mean I am not finished so something could have happened but I don't know! I was thinking she could be a conflict in the future possibly, maybe I will find out tomorrow!

    I love Inseparable! All time favorite Jonas song! I am glad you picked that one for Joe to sing

    I was like DAMN when she blew up at her mom! I didn't see it coming, but I guess a couple years of pent of aggression will do that!

    The whole Frankie and Addison's cookies made me crack up! Fabio! :) And it reminded me of the JONAS episode where Frankie likes Macy but then can't "date" anymore because she made terrible cookies!

    Team Taylor Swift is a bitch and it's about time Joe Jonas realized he could do better! Where do I sign up! lol jk! I loved it though! I made me think of all the funny Teams there are since Twilight came out!

    Okay how does the family not realize those two girls were reporters. I mean come on. I felt like they were interviewing us. They kept asking about Addison, blah, blah, blah! Come on! Staring you right in the faced people! lol I guess that wouldn't make for an interesting story!

    "Not a snowball's chance in hell" Hey I say that! I have never actually heard anyone else use it before!

    Piece of my mind! A girl I know says I am going to give them a POMM! lol

    I love All Time Low. Once my friend mixed up them with Allstar Weekend and Big Time Rush and said Allstar Rush or something like that! lol

    Okay so I will comment tomorrow when I finish! lol not going to lie I took notes so I wouldn't forget what I wanted to say!
    Amanda
    May 13th, 2011 at 06:42am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Awesome Update :)
    You're not gonna beat around the bush are you Joseph?
    I seriously busted out laughing when I read what Joe's question was.
    I understand where Addison is coming from.
    I'm glad that she's trying to respect Joe's promise even if he doesn't want to.
    UPDATE LIKE NOW PLEASE!! :)
    May 13th, 2011 at 03:06am
  • troubled thoughts;

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    It's been a while since the last time I read this story and now I finally can read it again! School has been so hectic lately :/
    Well, just wanna say that I love the website and the updates!! :D
    Can't wait for more :D
    May 8th, 2011 at 09:42am
  • fiction tears;

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    You always know when to update xDD
    I like how this was placed, and a new website?
    I have it bookmarked already :D
    May 2nd, 2011 at 02:53pm
  • Nanook

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    Hm... so, first of all, like Katherine said, I love the new banner as well. I like, how it's like, animated, now. :D
    Loved the new update! Hm... so yay! Addison and Lily made up! :) That's good. :) Hm... and Addison avoiding Joe... I really hope they work things out soon, I hate seeing them not together. :( Aw... and hm... I wonder if Finn is really Addison's brother? :o Interesting, interesting... you have me thinking now that they may be twins or something. But idk.
    Overall, great update! Can't wait for more! :D
    May 1st, 2011 at 11:40pm
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    First off I would like to say, I LOVE the new banner!
    It's really cool && awesome :)
    Secondly, I really ejoyed this chapter :)
    I am so happy that Lily && Addison have kissed && made up!
    So we're gonna have to wait for the Joe situation, if that's what you want to call it, to be fixed.
    I wonder why she went to her grandpa's...?
    I would prefer for Ted to be her biological father than Donnie.
    For the simple fact that that's who she grew up with as her father.
    So UPDATE SUPER SOON PLEASE!! :)
    May 1st, 2011 at 05:33am
  • MindlessDreaming

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    This was a good chapter :)
    I really liked it :)
    April 23rd, 2011 at 06:08am
  • Nanook

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    Loved the update! :D Aw, loved Joe and Addison's date; too cute! :) Aw, but by the end of the chapter... they had their first fight. :( That's not too good.
    Aw, and I love how Addison likes CSI! lol. I do as well. :) I've never watched the New York one, though; my preference being the original in Las Vegas. lol. But haha, anyway, I just thought that was cool that it was her favorite tv show. :)
    Ugh, sorry it took me so dang long to comment. I haven't been on here much this week; just now having time to read the update. :/ But it was an amazing update, really. :) And I can't wait for more! :D
    April 22nd, 2011 at 02:51am
  • JJonas_CQuiseng

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    Awesome update!
    Uh-oh someone is begining to get sexually frustrated...
    I hope everything get back to normal with Joe && Addison, as well as Addison && Lily.
    Once I post this comment I will check out the website!
    Can't wait to see it :)
    UPDATE SUPER SOON PLEASE!! :)
    April 19th, 2011 at 06:27pm
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    First fight xDD
    feeling for Addison
    Might nice for Joe to take Addison see Matt xDD
    More interesting as it gets longer xD
    April 18th, 2011 at 11:38am
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    loove this story(: update soon por favor!
    April 18th, 2011 at 07:49am