I'm reading this a year later and still loving it as much as I did in the first place. I've said this before, and even though the story's over, you did an amazing job writing this.
I have to say, I'm quite sad this story is over. It's so wonderful, nothing like I've ever read before. It's simply brilliant, and I just adore the way you write. You're really good and I hope one day you become a famous author. This story will probably stay on my top favorites. I absolutely love and adore it. I think the last line was my favorite line through the whole expanse of the story. Lovely story, beautiful ending. Thank you for sharing this with us.
-i have been silently reading, without commenting. >.< but i figure it's time for me to now comment. i cant say how much this story was touching and how well it was written. <3
They are finally back together!!!!!!!!! I am so happy that John finally realized that he could have lost both of his siblings if he did decided to stay with that other chick. So now Jane is teaching dancing lessons, her true passion, John is building a new hospital and Johnathan is looking after them now. YES! they finally moved out of that horrid place that was once they home and got a new place for themselves. Now they won't have to worry about their ever hurting them again. The ending was so serene and peaceful, just them there lying in bed, holding each other and sleeping peacefully. I have very much enjoyed reading this story, a lot of angst and love, you really captured the love between the siblings. You have done an excellent job writing this story! XD BRAVO!!!!!!!
Holly crappers! yay im so happy that they are toghther agsain xD does that makes me a asick person? Well im not cuz i do not think of my siblings that way but still i cant help it that im happy there toghther again :) come on everyone and comment so we can get the last chapter!